Aamar self composed song Tomake Chhara...

Hi guys
its the accoustic version of my song called Tomake Chhara
Recording quality isn't good...
Make some comments plzzzzzzzzzzz

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=590570&songID=4427006


Lyrics:
Shurjaster ektu aage
ami dekhechi tomai alo adhare
du chokh dekheni kichui tomake chhara
e mon chai ni kichui tomake chhara

Chorus:
bishader shei khone/nimogno aabege
bishonno katakuti khela
Tumi dekhoni amake kovu/ridoyer shei jontrona
beche achi ami eka/shudhu eka
tomake chhara....

Valobeshe tomake
ami hariye gechi kothai kobe
tumi vebecho shudhu tomari kotha
tumi khujecho shudhu tomari batha

Chorus:::