Aalam - e - Madhoshi

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Babydoll, Feb 15, 2006.

  1. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Aatishe tar se sairaab hoke humne
    jaana hai maza maikhanaye mohabbat ka

    unke hatho se jo piya aab ka jaam
    to laga jaise piyo ho pani jannat ka

    Simta tha baho main aise humko
    jaise humse lipta ho guldasta phoolo ka

    itni narmi se usne saraha mujhe
    jaise main hu koi baccha masum sa

    Aise madhosh hoke bikhre the hum
    jaise chaman saja ho phoolo ka

    ( Aatishe tar means Lips of beloved
    Aab means Water )
     
  2. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    udi baba...you are simply g8 babby...but why i am seeing same theme and same tone in your poems :think:

    zara kuch hat ke likho...aisa jo naa ki se ne chocha hai aur nahi choche ga :rock:
     
  3. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    acha chalo aisa bhi kuch likh ke dekhte hai es se pehle ke koi aur sochna shuru kar de main hi kar deti hu ;)
     
  4. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thats the spirit...keep it up...
     
  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    wow..dollie...
    tht was great.... im quiet impressed wit the words u use in ur poetry..
     
  6. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx nims :)
     

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