Aatishe tar se sairaab hoke humne jaana hai maza maikhanaye mohabbat ka unke hatho se jo piya aab ka jaam to laga jaise piyo ho pani jannat ka Simta tha baho main aise humko jaise humse lipta ho guldasta phoolo ka itni narmi se usne saraha mujhe jaise main hu koi baccha masum sa Aise madhosh hoke bikhre the hum jaise chaman saja ho phoolo ka ( Aatishe tar means Lips of beloved Aab means Water )
udi baba...you are simply g8 babby...but why i am seeing same theme and same tone in your poems :think: zara kuch hat ke likho...aisa jo naa ki se ne chocha hai aur nahi choche ga :rock:
acha chalo aisa bhi kuch likh ke dekhte hai es se pehle ke koi aur sochna shuru kar de main hi kar deti hu