Aakhir Kyu

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Babydoll, Mar 26, 2006.

  1. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    ye dil tujhe itni shiddat se chahta kyu hai
    Har saans ke sath tera hi naam aata kyu hai

    Tu kitna bhi mujhse talkh e talluk rakhle
    Zikr phir bhi tera meri zaban pe aata kyu hai

    Yuh to hai kayi fasle tere mere bich
    Lgata phir bhi tu mujhko meri jaan sa kyu hai

    Teri furkat main tadapne ki ho chuki hai adat meri
    Tere dur hone ka phir bhi ehsaas mujko rulata kyu hai

    Ye jaanti hu ke tujhko nahi mohabbat mujhse
    Magar phir bhi lab pe mere tera hi naam aata kyu hai

    Hai yaqeen tujhko paana na hoga mumqeen mere liye
    Ye dil phir bhi roz umeed ki shama jalata kyu hai

    Mehsus ki hai berukhi teri baato main kayi baar maine
    Lehjo wo phir bhi tera mujhko itna bhata kyu hai

    Hai khabar mujhko nikalega tu meri chahat ka janaza ek din
    Mann mera phir bhi tere khwab sajata kyu hai

    Gar bichad na hi hai to khuda humko milata kyu hai
    Mujhko akhir wo itna satata kyu hai

    Dil mera tujhko itni shiddat se chahta kyu hai
    Har saans ke sath tera hi naam aata kyu hai
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    well done .......
     
  3. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx madhuresh ....
     
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nicely said..
     
  5. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    thnx nims..
     
  6. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    hey kool, tht's good. khatarnaak alfaaz :p: but definately nicely written.
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    nice poem....
    The Title reminded me of my poem....had the same title...but with too many question marks....
     
  8. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx sachoo g ..

    kya sach main mere alfaaz khatarnaak hai :eek::
     
  9. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    thnx garima...
     
  10. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    budhu, khatarnaak = awesome here.. phew..
     
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    yh..the title reminded me of Garima's poem..
    bohot khoob likha hai aapne
    lekin kuch sawaalon ke jawab shayd hi kabhi mile hai ;)

    anywy
    i liked the poem..:)
     
  12. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Toh aise kehna tha na yaar..bekaar main bache ki jaan nikal li na :dance: ;) :p:
     
  13. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Sach kaha aapne kuch sawal ta umr ke liye mahez ek sawaal ban ke hi reh jate hai...

    anywayzz thnx
     

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