U don't know anything .. jz take a nipple n thrust it in ur mouth .. no need to conclude anythin wen u know nothin
Seems as if another heart is broken. And I think when Garima took to writing poems...it was a step forward to looking at finer things in life. There are people who get destructive when they are heart-broken and spoil there life...this is not the case with Garima and its something to be proud about that she has taken to constructive things when life seemed to be harsh. About being heart-broken...trust me life is beautiful and u will realize it with time. And I really hope that in near future...you laugh thinking that you ever thought that it was sad. Its just a way of life...to teach us that at times you have to learn to leave the past and move on...with most of the people..it is a harsh lesson...but I am sure...you will move way ahead... I dont know anything...and i wonder if anything i said is appropriate or not in this context. - Bharat
Thanks for the concern guys... I think we shud just stop it here...lets move on... m sure the person wud b equally sad....lets not drag this further.... cos as the poem says at the end....i do pray for that...no matter what. heart is broken...but lets b hopeful ....lets forget n forgive...wat say??? For the sake of peace & happines... By posting this poem i just tuk the frustation out...& its out now...
I hate to make the Poetry forum a place for ripping apart the poem and making it a topic of discussion i wouldnt ask you to be strong and forgive and forget i wont even say i understand coz bloody hell i may not! the poem is very touching By the way men arent scared their jus insecure.. i guess they like to be seduced for anything and everything.. and its usually starts with building of walls then breaking them and tehn building them again.. its a cycle they all follow.. Note: what i say or write are my views.. No one is obliged to agree or disagree with my views..
Stop it!! Hey guys stop it now,lets concentrate on the real reason this forum is for...... and kinights_diwani even I wanna know who u r?wats that id for? ooops forgot to mention...not in this thread plzzzzzzz.
life is good garry .... life is good ... but there is one down side to it .... its too short ... too short to sit and stare at your broken heart wondering who broke it and why? .. forget it .. what ever the reason ... get up smile .. collect all the pieces and mend it again ... there are 6 billion people in the world ... one can always guarantee that there is someone out there who would return a smile for your smile ... be gullible but be strong .. be wise and but be proud .. of what you are ... disappointments, are a part of life .. you get disappointed cuz you expect .. you expect cuz you hope .. and when you have hopes .. that means you are alive ... but if you take disappointments to your heart .. it will stop you in your tracks .. you'll never take that next turn .. and for all i know .. there is a good person right around that same corner .. waiting for you .. there is .. trust me .. i saw him when i went past yesterday .. haha enough of bullcrap from me ... wonderful poem .. keep it up..
@ walk_alone why do u care who i am....Iv told ya & am tellin ya agen am fatima from uk..!& as far as my id is concernd thn its rly non of ne1s buisness! 2 b very clear the world is huge & hes not the only guy callin himself "KNIGHT"
You know mate, there's a saying for people like both of us, if you cant say anything nice, dont say anything at all. So as a fellow smartass, i ask you to shut the f* up. Dont give your tongue in cheek in such threads.
LOL....was i talking to u disturbed.....that really shows how much disturbed u r. as far as this thread goes you aint got any idea wat iam talking abt so u shut ur pie hole and talk wen i talk to u.
You know, it really has become cliche, jibing me about my ID. If you have anything better at all...i'd be glad to hear it. And "pie hole" bro? Wow, that's what the kids in kindergarten call an ass hole. Glad to teach you the right terminology, let's not spam the thread, and if you have a difference, i hope you will have the courage to settle it out in PM's.
Hey dude i got no reason to fight with u so chill out...........sent u a pm by the way. and in case i had to take it out on u i had much better words that wd have been much easy to understand by u atleast. chapter close.
nice thread............thanks to the almighty atleast who made you so creative in writing the feelings properly with the choice of words..special mention to the person for whom you dedicate the poem......loosing is another way to wait for good things....i hope u understand better the life and relationship now.....the word care/sympathy/afffection/love have deeper meaning.....god wanted you to knw through that person....and HE HAS DONE THAT DID YOU EVER ASK GOD WHEN YOU GIVE GOOD THINGS AAKHIR KYUN? THEN NO COMPLAIN WHEN HE GIVES TOUGH TIME WHY ..AAKHIR KYUN? soory to say..you proved again of you great imaginational power of yourself.. you write well so go on......and i dont think so really it will be ur LAST SAD POEM..........i doubt that really..........you express well in the sad genre... rohit astroguru26
