This is goin to b the last sad poem frm me...(Abhi, Notty, Shak....so u dont hv to carry a tissue while reading my poem ppl close to me would kno the reason & feelings behind this poem...& the person for whom i hv written this poem would also kno that....i need not mention it specifically here. Kuch na keh kar bhi tumne bohot kuch keh dala Zakham na dekar bhi tumne ek nasoor de dala Kyu kiya aisa mere sath Kya bigada tha maine tumhara Kyu kaha ki thamoge mera hath Jab chhod ke jana hi tha yu besahara Kaise bhulaega yeh dil tumhe Kaise niklega tumhara khayal is dil se Kya karungi jab tumhari yaad ayegi Kisse bulaungi jab ye baharein fir baahein failayengi Ye mausam to laut ke nahi ayega Tera khayal bhi is dil se bahar nahi jayega Saansein tadapti rahengi is kashmakash me Rooh jalti rahegi is dhoke ki aag me Pyar karna chahenge par kar nahi payenge Kissi pe mar mitna chahenge par mar nahi payenge Har wo baat, har wo jhoot yaad rahega Jo har lamha mujhe sun ne ko milta rahega Kaano me goonjegi har baat tumhari Yaad rahega ki mazak bana dia tumne chahat ka hamari Baddua dena fitrat me nahi hai hamari Jaao tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge Dua karte hain us Khuda se Ki tumhe lag jaye umra hamari Thanks for reading. P.S Its not always necessary to generalise your feelings but i hv learnt not to b artificial/fake when it comes to emotions... & there is a reason behind posting this poem here.
Hey Garima, U are simply a great poet. I understand ur feelings coz I also used to write and post poems here. And U are rite, there's nothing in artificiallity. Good things are never Artificial. May God Bless U and may all ur dreams come true!
@Varshita Thanks...I knew that u wud b the first one to read this....Thanks for being ther...& thanks for the title.... @Sanjay..Thanks yaar...atleast ther is one male who think that way...otherws most of the male population feels that if they share ther emotions that wud prove that they r not strong enuf to handle life...Happy Birthday once again...n I hope u too get evrythng.
@Garima, I don't know what ppl think but if all the emotions are lost then a person can be said to be dead. But one thing is also sure that emotional ppl don't have a place in this world. They are just kicked out. So, be strong and forget everything, sing a new song, start a new life and walk a new road. Life is very short, dear, and remember that we are born just not to eat & sleep but to do something for the humanity. And if we can really do something, we get the satisfaction. And that is Life. I'm telling U all this becoz I've also gone thru the same situation. Well, it's too late. So, go and sleep now. Sweet Dreams!
I had to be the first one...couldnt sleep.. and once i heard it.. i knew i had to read it myself. I cant just praise the words or the expression used in the poem... as the feelings behind it are far more important, deep and cant just be constrained in words.
@Sanjay...i still hv to work till 6.30 wud reach home by 7.30 & wud go to sleep by 8.00 thanks ALOT....hope to see ppl like u around..All the best. @Varshu...ab sone jayegi ya nahi :annoyed:???? Thanks ALOT.....:grin:
^^another excellent work 4m u ..... bt I bet dis wont be the last sad poem 4m u .. cuz u write them really well .....
@Garima, i dont know if i'm supposed to know, but i know anyway, so i can relate to your poem. I dont comment on such poems usually, but knowing the circumstances behind it....nice work...go on with life, nothing's worth crying for...
@ garima.... yaar amazing poem but i just wish it didn't happen cause i really don't want u to rite poems which r ritten once u get hurt! hope u feel better gurl!
gary, pm me the name who did this to u.....il kill him with my crappiest of the crap poets........and don ya be sad again....good this is ur last sad poem...my bucket is also full of my tears now......BE HAPPY BE HAPPY BE HAPPY............BE HAPPY.......forget all....life is a guitar, replace the rusted strings with the new ones.......keep writing..and keep smiling......** CALLS UP THE TISSUE PAPER GUY TO CANCEL FURTHER TISSUE PAPER ORDERS **
whats wrong??? Hey c'mon garima!!! I dont know what eva happened to u but there s more to life than all this..: I dunno how it feels after being heartbroken :think: but agar heartbreak ke baad u get the capability of writing such wonderful poems to bhagvaan kare ki sabhi ka heartbreak ho jaye... jus kiddin:beer: nicely expressed poem..garrrzzz
Deff a lovely peice of work frm u once again I dont know what happend garima but all i say is life's 2 short...So live it happily & Whoever u "THINK" has caused u pain,most likely has a reason or did it unknwingly so i suggest evry1 should have no hard feelings against whoever it is...Yea friends are hurt 4 u but there's always 2 sides 2 a story!!Sorry if im offending any1 didn mean 2 but i just dont think its ryt 2 accuse sum1 4 causing pain!... Take care keep smiling....Have faith in the almighty he'l sure give u tons of happiness..Coz am sure u deserve it!!
