Aakhir Kyu????

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Feb 23, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    This is goin to b the last sad poem frm me...(Abhi, Notty, Shak....so u dont hv to carry a tissue while reading my poem:p:)

    ppl close to me would kno the reason & feelings behind this poem...& the person for whom i hv written this poem would also kno that....i need not mention it specifically here.

    Kuch na keh kar bhi tumne bohot kuch keh dala
    Zakham na dekar bhi tumne ek nasoor de dala

    Kyu kiya aisa mere sath
    Kya bigada tha maine tumhara
    Kyu kaha ki thamoge mera hath
    Jab chhod ke jana hi tha yu besahara

    Kaise bhulaega yeh dil tumhe
    Kaise niklega tumhara khayal is dil se
    Kya karungi jab tumhari yaad ayegi
    Kisse bulaungi jab ye baharein fir baahein failayengi

    Ye mausam to laut ke nahi ayega
    Tera khayal bhi is dil se bahar nahi jayega
    Saansein tadapti rahengi is kashmakash me
    Rooh jalti rahegi is dhoke ki aag me

    Pyar karna chahenge par kar nahi payenge
    Kissi pe mar mitna chahenge par mar nahi payenge
    Har wo baat, har wo jhoot yaad rahega
    Jo har lamha mujhe sun ne ko milta rahega

    Kaano me goonjegi har baat tumhari
    Yaad rahega ki mazak bana dia tumne chahat ka hamari

    Baddua dena fitrat me nahi hai hamari
    Jaao tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge
    Dua karte hain us Khuda se
    Ki tumhe lag jaye umra hamari

    Thanks for reading.

    P.S Its not always necessary to generalise your feelings but i hv learnt not to b artificial/fake when it comes to emotions...

    & there is a reason behind posting this poem here.
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  2. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    I have no words...:eek::
    I only wish this shouldnt have happenned to you.
  3. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Hey Garima, U are simply a great poet. I understand ur feelings coz I also used to write and post poems here. And U are rite, there's nothing in artificiallity. Good things are never Artificial. May God Bless U and may all ur dreams come true!
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Varshita Thanks...I knew that u wud b the first one to read this....Thanks for being ther...& thanks for the title....:)

    @Sanjay..Thanks yaar...atleast ther is one male who think that way...otherws most of the male population feels that if they share ther emotions that wud prove that they r not strong enuf to handle life...Happy Birthday once again...n I hope u too get evrythng.
  5. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    @Garima, I don't know what ppl think but if all the emotions are lost then a person can be said to be dead. But one thing is also sure that emotional ppl don't have a place in this world. They are just kicked out. So, be strong and forget everything, sing a new song, start a new life and walk a new road. Life is very short, dear, and remember that we are born just not to eat & sleep but to do something for the humanity. And if we can really do something, we get the satisfaction. And that is Life.
    I'm telling U all this becoz I've also gone thru the same situation. Well, it's too late. So, go and sleep now. Sweet Dreams!
  6. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    I had to be the first one...couldnt sleep.. and once i heard it.. i knew i had to read it myself. I cant just praise the words or the expression used in the poem... as the feelings behind it are far more important, deep and cant just be constrained in words. :)
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Sanjay...i still hv to work till 6.30 wud reach home by 7.30 & wud go to sleep by 8.00 :) thanks ALOT....hope to see ppl like u around..All the best.

    @Varshu...ab sone jayegi ya nahi :annoyed:???? Thanks ALOT.....:grin:
  8. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    ^^another excellent work 4m u .....

    bt I bet dis wont be the last sad poem 4m u .. cuz u write them really well .....
  9. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    @Garima, i dont know if i'm supposed to know, but i know anyway, so i can relate to your poem. I dont comment on such poems usually, but knowing the circumstances behind it....nice work...go on with life, nothing's worth crying for...
  10. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    Nice poem but for wrong reason....chill out....wish someone cd write poems for me toooo...LOL
  11. #iR@


    @ garima.... yaar amazing poem but i just wish it didn't happen cause i really don't want u to rite poems which r ritten once u get hurt! hope u feel better gurl!
  12. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    gary, pm me the name who did this to u.....il kill him with my crappiest of the crap poets........and don ya be sad again....good this is ur last sad poem...my bucket is also full of my tears now......BE HAPPY BE HAPPY BE HAPPY............BE HAPPY.......forget all....life is a guitar, replace the rusted strings with the new ones.......keep writing..and keep smiling......** CALLS UP THE TISSUE PAPER GUY TO CANCEL FURTHER TISSUE PAPER ORDERS **
  13. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Gud one dear...
    Keep it up!

  14. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR


    Kya logon ko really itna gum hai, itni shikayat hai zindagi se :think:
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  15. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    Very nicely done>>:rock:
  16. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Ignore this post..

    I think I should interfere less in personal things ..
  17. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    whats wrong???

    Hey c'mon garima!!!:mad:

    I dont know what eva happened to u but there s more to life than all this..:eek::
    I dunno how it feels after being heartbroken :think: but agar heartbreak ke baad u get the capability of writing such wonderful poems to bhagvaan kare ki sabhi ka heartbreak ho jaye...;)
    jus kiddin:beer:

    nicely expressed poem..garrrzzz
  18. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Deff a lovely peice of work frm u once again:)

    I dont know what happend garima but all i say is life's 2 short...So live it happily & Whoever u "THINK" has caused u pain,most likely has a reason or did it unknwingly so i suggest evry1 should have no hard feelings against whoever it is:)...Yea friends are hurt 4 u but there's always 2 sides 2 a story!!Sorry if im offending any1 didn mean 2 but i just dont think its ryt 2 accuse sum1 4 causing pain!...

    Take care keep smiling....Have faith in the almighty he'l sure give u tons of happiness..Coz am sure u deserve it!!
  19. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    ^^wat a reply.... now i really wanna know who you are ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  20. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    and the filmfare goes to.....

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