Aaj tu aa

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sharmontime, Jul 21, 2015.

  1. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    Zindagi ki iss daur par
    Meri raah mein jo Tum mile ho
    Har shaam Suraj dalne do
    Har pal Guzarne do, tere saath

    Meri aakhri saans na rukhnedo
    Mere Har Kadam saath do
    Tum Jo ho, main bhi Hun
    Jo bhi Hun, tera hi Hun

    Jaise kudrat Waqt mein badalta hai
    Din Raat Phir se Aatha hai
    Mera pyaar laut ke tu aa
    Aa mere dil mein bas ja
     
  2. monica_decosta

    monica_decosta Active Member

    this is an example of poorly written poetry .. it seems u just wanted to gush out some thoughts and you did it in a smash ...thoda to time diya karo.
     

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