Zindagi ki iss daur par Meri raah mein jo Tum mile ho Har shaam Suraj dalne do Har pal Guzarne do, tere saath Meri aakhri saans na rukhnedo Mere Har Kadam saath do Tum Jo ho, main bhi Hun Jo bhi Hun, tera hi Hun Jaise kudrat Waqt mein badalta hai Din Raat Phir se Aatha hai Mera pyaar laut ke tu aa Aa mere dil mein bas ja
this is an example of poorly written poetry .. it seems u just wanted to gush out some thoughts and you did it in a smash ...thoda to time diya karo.