I m tired of giving introes for my poems... so i guess i will just shut up and give my poem right away for you guys to comment upon Unse nazre takra gayi jo aaj Dil ko ek sunehra mauka mil gaya Chipaye jin jazbaato ko ji rahi thi Unhe lafzon ka sahara mil gaya Dafn kiya jin tammanao ko Unse aaj humara saamna ho gaya Jin zakhmo ko bhula chale the Guzarta lamha unhe taaza kar gaya Lakh chaha tha na chahu jisse Lakh jatan kiye bhulane ko usse Muthi se fisalti reh gayi zindagi Waqt ne wahi la thehraya mujhe Yaad hai aaj bhi woh pal Jab andhero ke baadal the ghir aaye Sawalon ke tarkash chale the Vishwas ki lau thi dagmagai Faasle badte chale aur Zindagi sab peeche chod aai Aaj hawa ne hai rukh moda Subah ek nai kiran le aai Umeed ke nai deep hai jale Pyaar ki baharein phir laut aai Kat jayega zindagi ka yeh safar Saath jeene ka iraada bana liya Toofano se darr nahi hai ab mujhe Tum mein apne sahil ko jo pa liya Zindagi se aaj phir kadam hai milaye Kismat ne aaj phir ek mauka de diya Naye sapne hai sajaye, nai umeedein hai lagai Aaj phir jeene ka bahana mil gaya
ye bahuut lambi hai kiss karne ko bhi, seedhi lagani ho gi but deserves kiss :-* "jeene ka bahana mil gaya " mujhe ek accha thought mil gaya....
Kat jayega zindagi ka yeh safar Saath jeene ka iraada bana liya Toofano se darr nahi hai ab mujhe Tum mein apne sahil ko jo pa liya this para was rilly gud poem is gud to
@ pamposh....i dont wanna get tied down by the standards set... each poem should set a standard for itself. @madhuresh...thanks
Thanks martina...i know... people have many questions... But i guess i just wanna let my poems do the talking
:think: :think: ...... . . . . .:think:. . . . . :think: very good poem.....mujhe sochne pe majboor kar dia....: :help: call coming ur way......once i get my brk :
@ nimi.... I m just loving the way my poems are misleading people to believe certain things @garima... socho socho... kabhi kabhi yeh karna bhi sehat ke liye acha hota hai !! : Thanks for waking me up though... need to finish a project... work has just piled up after that untimely unplanned vacation
I love it when people start reading too much in between the lines... when there is nothing really to be read in there A lot is left for people to infer and interpret and eventually there is too much that is assumed.
I see lots of different views, opninions and suggestions but I really loved it.It's not a very long poem.It's expressing thoughts with completeness. I have written a very long poem......so I am gi8ving second thoughts to put it on IGT......Guys Shall I? Jhel lenge aap log? Lemme know.....he he he...... Yaar, I feel so bored from office.......
Thank you anum... do post yours... would love to read it.. really liked your last one. ur in office at this hour??
Just wanna say here.....I simply loved it...the thoughts n words go nicely together....It isn't a long one rather a complete poem ....Now I will give second thoughts to put mine on IGT as it is longer n longer........Shall I guys??? Do lemme know.....he he he .......But i amsure you will like it.... Anyways....reps for you dear......cool !!!!!!
