Aahista Aahista

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Babydoll, Feb 25, 2006.

  1. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Duniya mein humein laya gaya tha bade zor - o - sor ke sath,
    Ab ese hum chode ja rahe hai aahista aahista

    Jo kal tak kiya karte the dawah hamari qarabat ka
    Wahi aaj daman samete ja rahe hai aahista aahista

    Ha ek ghum ko humne saha samaj kar aakhri lekin
    Ye silsila to badhta hi ja raha hai aahista aahista

    Ek ek sapne chun kar sajaya tha aasmaa
    Wo Khwab bhi bikharte ja rahe hai aahista aahista

    Bohot koshish ki humne muskurane ki lekin
    Dard chehre se tabassum le ja raha hai aahista aahista

    Tinka tinka jod ke banaya tha ek aashiya humne
    Hawa use bhi bikhre ja rahi hai aahista aahista

    Saamna karne nikle the zindagi ka zor ke sath
    Ab apne hi hosla tode ja rahe hai aahista aahista

    Bade mushqil se banaye the jo rishte humne
    Sukhi ret ki tarha hath se phisalte ja rahe hai aahista aahista

    Kalam kya rakhdi humne in kagaz par
    Sher khud mukammal huwe ja raha hai aahista aahista
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Kalam kya rakhdi humne in kagaz par
    Sher khud mukammal huwe ja raha hai aahista aahista

    very well said..last ball pe chakka
     
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    wah...wah...babydoll...good work!!!

    [[pehli line mein extra "humein" hata do...]]
     
  4. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Oh !! wo galti se likh diya tha..

    Thnx alt amit
     
  5. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx Madhuresh :)
     
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    r u really from tanzania..
    ye itne acche indians kaha kaha base hain..?
     
  7. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    5K points to babydoll..meri taraf se....:)
     
  8. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    :) thnx.. haa main Tanzania se hi hu
     
  9. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    @ thnx Amit :nw:
     
  10. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    This was simply,truly,amzingly.........goooood.........Nice thought and words put together....u rock..
     
  11. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thank u very much anum :nw:
     

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