A Tango of words (A Sonnet..!)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by idefixé03, Feb 10, 2009.

  1. idefixé03

    idefixé03 New Member

    Hi everyone, I am back after a long time..well some might remember me(idefixe)..actually i lost my password, so had to register again as a new member. So this is my first post after a long long time...Enjoy..!


    After, you are done with all the talking.
    After, I am done with all the listening.
    maybe, you can do all the listening
    and I can do all the talking
    or what ever is left of it,
    was not spoken or
    listened to
    little
    and big
    words, fragile and
    inconsequential. Squealing
    our guts out, in harmony we lay
    in silence. And nothing is spoken or
    listened to: now merely a gesture will do.
     
  2. wow ....im loving it ;)


    really beautifully crafted, shaped !!
     
  3. idefixé03

    idefixé03 New Member

    Hey thanks monika for the aprreciation...hmm..actually its intented to be in an hourglass format, but it's not showing that way in this forum
     
  4. idefixé03

    idefixé03 New Member

    Hey thanks monika for the aprreciation...hmm..actually its intented to be in an hourglass format, but it's not showing that way on this forum.
     
  5. laxmikant13

    laxmikant13 New Member

    Can i use this sonnet and compose a song?
     
  6. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Code:
       
    After, you are done with all  the   talking.
      After, I am done with all the  listening.
         maybe, you can do all the listening
             and I can do all the    talking
                or what ever is left of it,
                     was not spoken or
                         listened    to
                              little
                           and    big
                     words, fragile and
                inconsequential. Squealing 
           our guts out, in harmony we  lay
         in silence. And nothing is spoken  or
     listened to: now merely a gesture will  do


    It's easy when you know how.
     
  7. idefixé03

    idefixé03 New Member

    Well..@laxmikant you can use the sonnet, but was never meant to be a song...anyways i am cool if can do anything interesting out of it..!

    @bjr.....thanks buddy for showing the way..but i still dont know how..And ha..i can vouch for ur mod status.
     
  8. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    If you want to use the spaces as they are, put your text in between the code tags
     
  9. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    nice sonnet man......i've put my own in other thread, temme if u liked it,
     

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