when i wrote in IGT.. someone asked me..why u write only on love.. there are many things to write.. so..thouh love is my favourite domain to write..im attempting in different arena of life for poetry... is this try amature or good enough..is upto u to decide..coz for me..my every writting is close to my heart..so this is too..! A Stranger In The MirroR..... dont look in the mirror when you cry.. cause all you'll see is an unknown face captured in a wry.. a stranger mocking at you.. hollowness in his eyes bemusing you.. trail left by the path of dried tears amusing you.. and asking you one question again and again.. why.. why.. and.. why.. do i deserve all this pain.. small wrinkles at his forehead suggesting ripening of sorrows.. desperate persue of something unknown.. in a hope..if some happiness he could borrow.. his limp thouhts.. defeated soul.. frustrated mind.. bitterness in his face jitterness tightning its embrace.. cursing the time.. that stranger in the mirror freaks you out makes you frown more and more.. makes you drown.. takes you down more and more.. leaving you nowhere.. just helplessness.. countless regrets.. endless worries.. so i say.. dont look in the mirror when you cry.. instead look into your innerself.. someone known there, waiting for you to rediscover him.. and give your life a second try.. so dont look in the mirror when you cry.. ---------------------------------------------------- comments please..
:beer: a gr8 effort !!!!!!!!! but i guess there won't be too many people who look into the mirror when they cry.....even i never thought of looking into the mirror, if at all i cried...
@elysian... dont judge the words only... it has some deep meaning in it.. let me explain.. the concept of poem is.. dont look at mirror when you cry... means.. dont look at the present miserable state of yours.. (mirror just shows reflection, it can not catch ur innerself.. ) instead of crying over your miserability n helpnessness u should comeout of sorrows n give a confident person inside you take over all defeat n let u win again.. i hope my poem carries this message effectively... n thanks for the comments..
yes you are... btw..i like to have your comments everytime.. words are wasted if a good reader like you can not decepher it.. so plz keep your comments coming.. i may improve in my skills..
hmmm ... real good usage of words here to convey messages.. -- its been great in either forms -- this style and the topori ishtyle!! Look fwd to more versatie writings -- they're refreshin to read!!
Gr8 work Nimmo... i liked the idea.. Mirrors have been fav of all poets.. u expressed it beautifully.. and good use of words too.. ( but a bit difficult for me : to understand)
nicely written nicely expressed prominent rhyming i like the depth of this poem which you substantiated beautifully with usage of apt words!! ..reps! :grin:
vishwaa.. gr8 to have ur comment everytime.. keeps on generating creativity wit me... thanks vini.. yes..ur my apt friend to appreciate my silly attempts like that.. hira.. just love you!! punnu... u r gr8 to notice n appreciate most of my work.. :nw:
