Inever knew, One morning I will wake up and this Love will be gone Today is that day Today is my first day of freedom Freedom of repeatedly asking myself Why is she not calling back Why did she say, she will come but she didn’t All I feel is emptiness Sad memories of an unrequited Love There is no longing, no desires Only the memories of unfulfilled hopes I am not heart broken I am just waking up to this reality That it would have never worked It was doomed from beginning All I remember, are broken promises How many times she said i love you, but she didn’t love me How many times she said she cared,but she didn’t care How many times she said she wanted me, but she didn’t want me It is over now, Go girl, go on and find somebody else “ not to love” find some body else “not to want” Somebody else “not to care” about I had enough of not-loving, not-caring, not-wanting comment guys
well frankly,its ok-ok... take the 2nd and 3rd para for instance...they contradict each other,..on one hand u say u have freedom now,and on the other hand u say that u are sad....what i mean to say is that with the feelin of freedom u are talking bout,..u get a feelin of anger n frustration,not sadness....n if u taklin bout sadness,u shoulldnt have talked bout the freedom thing... and the repetition of love-care-want thing is not carried out well....u know what i mean...just my little opinion...coz i too suck at writin break up poems:
thanks hardik but i have one point to say here. does fredom really mean happiness a child always want to be free free from studies free from scoldings free from any form of discipline so if a child runs away from his wards. DO you think he really will be happy. Freedom is not always happy here i mean freedom from her but not the attachments i had towards her maybe you will understand me
Madhur! dude, This is coming from the Wrong person..but dont think much.. it doesnt help... poem's good reflects whats in your heart words sayng something more.. something thats just for Her.. Take care..
^Decent effort, can do better, in any case you're much better than me, i cant write worth crap anyway.
I wont comment on anythng else but feelings...& that ws touching.. Let her go & wander till the time she wud kno ur worth...
thanks thanks garima ur advice is really good i will try to follow martini ur like always u have been (a darling) thanks amit
