a slightly less optimistic poem

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by shak, Sep 15, 2005.

  1. shak

    shak Harrr!

    my 4th bash

    and then sat the engineers with problem on hand
    "now we have men and creatures dwelling on land"
    how do we make them mate and produce?
    the reason they give is really powerfull
    with smell of treason and really angry hues
    why should we bring in the new borns you tell?
    just to take them through this earth called hell?
    its dull, dark, empty, distracting and bland
    one was wise and came with this idea so grand
    "lets create love and fool those blind humans!"
    they will fall and they will fight
    with purpose and all thier might
    crying in the solo winds, all through the night
    take this bland world all to new heights!
    and thus blinded they will fall ....
    men, women, teens, old, young and all ...
    in the name of love they will perform this circus
    hidden from the truth they will fulfill
    thier sole existing biological purpose!!!!
    so thats it my friends, the grand conspiracy of nature
    with the boot called love and thing called fate
    dictate the poor, blind humans called creatures
  2. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    hehe....kinda funny!.....yet ....good.....anywayz.... i like your fart poem posted loong back!
  3. shak

    shak Harrr!

    well i dint make it funny on purpose ... infact wanted to say someting really serious through this poem ... but if you find it funny.....cooooool! thnx alot
  4. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    i get the poem well...srk...:p:
  5. tejas

    tejas ..........

    That was really good Shahrukh....very intelligent. The kind of poem I'd like. Honestly, I didn't enjoy your previous works much...but this was good. Keep it up!
  6. shak

    shak Harrr!

    @rockin: thanx mate
    @T: oh thanx ... i really have put some thought behind this one .. not the on-the-spot poem.. i am pretty proud of this ...glad you got it
    cYpHeR likes this.
  7. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    poem is correct ...
  8. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    good one man....

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