my 4th bash and then sat the engineers with problem on hand "now we have men and creatures dwelling on land" how do we make them mate and produce? the reason they give is really powerfull with smell of treason and really angry hues why should we bring in the new borns you tell? just to take them through this earth called hell? its dull, dark, empty, distracting and bland one was wise and came with this idea so grand "lets create love and fool those blind humans!" they will fall and they will fight with purpose and all thier might crying in the solo winds, all through the night take this bland world all to new heights! and thus blinded they will fall .... men, women, teens, old, young and all ... in the name of love they will perform this circus hidden from the truth they will fulfill thier sole existing biological purpose!!!! so thats it my friends, the grand conspiracy of nature with the boot called love and thing called fate dictate the poor, blind humans called creatures
well i dint make it funny on purpose ... infact wanted to say someting really serious through this poem ... but if you find it funny.....cooooool! thnx alot
That was really good Shahrukh....very intelligent. The kind of poem I'd like. Honestly, I didn't enjoy your previous works much...but this was good. Keep it up!
@rockin: thanx mate @T: oh thanx ... i really have put some thought behind this one .. not the on-the-spot poem.. i am pretty proud of this ...glad you got it