halke se pakadanaa ye kallai meri... ke tuti choodiyon ka hisaab poochegaa... dheere se choona inn labon ko mere... ke chadhi lali ka jawaab poochegaa... chupke se aana sapnon me mere... ke zamaana har ek khayaal-o-khwaab poochega... : its so short... but means a lot hope u like it.....
^^^ hmm good one my reply.. kaye ko subah subah chilla reli hai meri maa.. tu hi baat itna question khali pili kaun puchega.. apun ko tera shayari phir bhi pasand aa gelaaa.. apun khush hoke tere ko reps de relaaaaaa
tere ajib sawalon se chidh kar bhi maine aakhir ye insaaf kiya... tune reps diye.. aur tarif ki.. issliye teraa taporiness maine maaf kiyaa... thanks vishwaa... cool ishtyle there..!
first four lines were good... suggest one more last line if u dont mind... " chupke se aana sapno me mere.. nahin to zamana meri bin soyii ankhon ka sabab poocchega " naaaannn..not good
Hey nice try bro!!! liked it.... @nimme....wont you allow me even one min of chain(in hindi)....posting too much too fast...reps dene ka to time de!!
Tooti choodiyan - 100 Rs. Nikli laali - Rs.250 Saving ur face frm the public - Priceless.... ? :wink:
Laakhon honge nigaah mein, kabhi mujhe bhi pick karo...Mere dosti ke 'icon' pe kabhi to 'double-click' karo... Hello nimisha ji i m a great fan of ur, u r the best at work.
Applause It doesn't mean you have written how many words or lines but how deep it goes to your heart makes it worthy. And as per my understanding it should be called a master piece. I would rather say lovely...... with best wishes pankaj
love can be so endearing. I LOVED the images that reading through this created in my mind. you're good at this.
