A birthday gift to my girlfriend. (For those about to say cheapo, it was followed by roses, a photo frame, and a greeting card on which it was written.) : O'er gentle breeze and clear skies, I wish for a chance upon the wind. Tonight, for you, if not be here, I'd let my thoughts dance upon the wind. I'd but wait for the dreary day to end, and for the night to glance upon the sill. With hazy visions my beady eyes beholden, I'd let my dreams dance upon the rill. O'er dawning rays and sylvan dew, the sylph and I shall continue the chant of the sacred slumberous night, the love of a pair pouring forth. Darts of Cupid they complain bedimmed, How much ardor a romance will contain? Between drops of amoroso and claps of thunder, I and you shall dance in the rain. ...and did she love it? YES !
Sucha mushy mushy piece ... doesn't sound good from a horses mouth ... imagine a horse singing it ..damm !!! .. u must consider changing ur name !!!
...to what? actually I was trying some old artistic expressions, twain-ish, though I'm nowhere close..
@monica... hahha..sure I will, problem is many thoughts/ideas aren't coming by these days @nandy... thanks ! took me a lot of time to structure it archaically!
I am trying to get some harmless romance .. but others just want a name to every relationship ... its like we are going for brands even when deciding a relationship BAD too BAD
haha well that depends on who are you trying the same with, and on your age, social, behavioral and 'other' compatibilities...
its so auld lang syne! loved the lines and the style both. you are an awesome poet horsey! the girl must have fallen so in love with you