Hey guys....this weekend i got to kno that even my Brother writes poem he shared this one with me...& i loved it....thot to share it with u guyz too...make sure that u post ur comments(good/bad) here aftr reading the poem coz i hv asked him to check the website whenevr he gets time Happy Reading.... Ajkal wo humse baat karne se katrate hain Dil me kuchh ankahe se lafz simte se huye hain Jinhe hum aj bhi kehte huye sharmate hain Kehna mushkil ho jata hai Jab jazbaaton ke jhonke samajh ki lehron se takrate hain Umeed nahi hai phir bhi dua me haath uth jaate hain Manzar aisa hai ki intezar me haath bhi uthe uthe thak jaate hain Kya karein, kya kahein kuchh samajh nahi paate hain Bas ek lambi si saans leke ruk jaate hain Daaman zindgi ka chhoot te ja raha hai Waqt yu hi guzarta ja raha hai Kuchh kehna chahte hain par chup reh jaate hain Aakhir kab tak, kab tak ye zuban khamosh rahegi Is khamoshi ka dard sahegi Isliye aj hum ye keh jaate hain... ...Ki aj kal wo humse baat karne se katrate hain waiting for ur comments now........
You know wht, garima..u tell ur bro thats one hlluva great peice! im not much of a urdu-person (urdu poetry and etc) and yet no enuf bout it to figure out thts its much hrder then english poetry and stuff. and this is some lit. not bad. and i love how he's takin it and summed it all back. in that one line... nice..real nice. keep it up! ~*~
excelllleeeennntttt!!! garry .. be scared be very scared cuz now you have a bit of a competition .. and i guess ... i am growin more of a fan of your brother's than yours ... haha hey brother! very nice .. i am weak on urdu as well .. but i gotta give it to you ... *clap*
nice one! reallly liked> "Umeed nahi hai phir bhi dua me haath uth jaate hain" ask ur bro to have a whack at english poetry too
sure vini....he writes once in a while..hez not regular @writing.. same as i was before being a part of IGT...
That was an excellent demonstration of mature poetry... don't know much abt poetry.. but these lines touched me... the way he symbolised head n heart.. cheers for ur bro :beer: wat is his name? vishwa