a pebble ...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Jan 18, 2014.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i was the pebble i guess

    dropped from a height

    into the vast stretch of the ocean

    i made a splash

    some noticed

    some marveled

    and then no one cared

    back again i was there in my own world i was there

    nowhere to be found again

    somewhere in depth

    someplace unknown

    some place solicit

    rejoicing my solitude

    i shall breathe my last here

    and still no one shall care

    i am that prayer i guess

    a prayer left unanswered

    a blessing not showered

    a road not traveled

    a song unsung

    the splashed drops of ink

    just a pebble , as i know

    a pebble - left undiscovered

    in the shelters of the ocean

    feeling the waves

    touch my coarse skin

    finding solace in the fact that it was there, the water

    it was a shelter, a well wisher, a warm womb

    or just a reminder? a reminder of my loneliness
    but who am i to wonder all this

    just a pebble who is not even questioned by existence itself...

    but then i guess i was just a question

    one of those which are left unanswered...
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  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I see you've gotten even better..
    and you must really love this place...
    and hi!
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank you :)
    and yeah i do love this place..its a great platform .. im just hoping more people reply, give their feedback ..
    sooooo in tht hope.. u see
    and hiiiii!! hw r things?
  4. great lines ....very well composed
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank you ^_^
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I've gotten very busy with masters studies n stuff...logged in just to see how things are...not too good...
    but I'll keep logging in... a little less frequently though...
    what's you doing?

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