A MUST READ BY ALL IGTIANS! just another bday...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Jun 5, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    HELLOOOOOOOOOO... yea ppl me back with ANOTHER poem and yea this time i really don't know wat i rote but this is something for ALL of u who wished me! :) nahi ppl... its actually fro EVERYONE! THX A LOT GUYS... u guys rock!!!!!!! DO COMMENT ON IT... if its wroth ur wishes or not! HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT! thx a LOT... luv ya alll...... :rock:

    oh and in this poem U= ALL IGTAINS! :nw:


    I heard wat u never said
    I spoke wat u never heard
    Never seen u
    Never met u
    These wishes seem like falling stars
    Stars with all the shine and sparkle
    But with no control over where they fall
    Still I thank u for ur prayers

    Never seen u
    Never met u
    Guess its just another bday
    But it could be my last
    16 bdays gone
    But none where as special as this one
    For u wished me
    Like u knew me
    And I knew u

    Unspoken words…
    Unheard whispers…I guess I was wrong
    Guess its just another bday
    But with; shine of the full moon
    Sparkling eyes like glitters
    Hidden smiles yet seen
    And with a mended heart
    I thank u
    For ur wishes
    Wishes I might not deserve

    But come on its just another bday
    For someone forgot to wish me
    Wish me on my bday…
    Said was busy…
    Yea I know… it was just another bday!
    Like every year it came and went
    But this time it was special
    For now I know how much u care
    Cause u gave me all ur wishes and prayers

    3rd June…
    Start of a new year…
    A new journey…
    A new dawn…
    A year closer to my end…
    A new journey about to finish
    A dawn about to set…
    Lost in the unrevealing darkness…

    THX AGAIN GUYS... comments :cool:

    u guys gave me a reason to smile... never forget it...

    ps: might seem its a little over done but trust me its NOT! ;)
    apurbajd, .:SpY_GaMe:. and vini like this.
  2. amazing hira..awesome...u r really "Poetess par excellence"...
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    aww..cho chweet...cute poem...and certainly not worth any "wroth" ;) ur getting reps!
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Arent you the darlingest little thing? Writing a poem for all of us, thank you sweetheart. It was a good poem, lacked imagery in certain places :p: Hehe, i'm just kidding. God bless you honey.
  5. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    good poem..
    sweetly written..!!:beer:
  6. shak

    shak Harrr!

    awwwww ..... *sniff* ... speechless ....
    friendship rules!!!!!!!!!!!
  7. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    cant find the proper words to describe that


    .......walks away ........((()))))**)))***)))
  8. #iR@


    @ devilshly... THX A LOT... but u guys r ma inspiration for this poem! :nw:

    @ vini... i am outta words! i guess thanks won't be enough... :eek::

    @ disturbed... YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEE..... now i am the darlingest little thing! :dance: thx man!

    @ ansh... THX MAN!!! :nw: all of u just can;t let me stop for like 5 mins CAN U?! ;)

    @ shak... GREAT TO HEAR FROM U MAN!!!! i guess u r back on igt? thxxxxxx:rock:

    @ spy_game... WOWWWWWWW.... did u just run outta words?! this must be something REALLLLLLYYYYYYY good! :p: kidding... THANKS!!

    i just hope everyone gets to read this...
  9. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    @ hira nope my brain is currently compleely filled with revision stuffs cant even type well (c my siggy got eggjam ;) ) but it was a very good one though :D
  10. #iR@


    ^ohk..... BEST OF LUCK!!!! :)
    Garima likes this.
  11. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    thnx :eek:: :eek:: :eek::
  12. ^ tere eggjams hain?...stilll in school or what bahi....;) ..chal best of luck from devil.....
  13. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    lovely poem yaar....real nice...bus..rest ive told u .....
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    aweee....that was shweet Hira....proves ur ability to write on 'evry' topic....repssssssssssss :):).
  15. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    awwwww, that was soo adorable of you to write a poem to thank us...
    you are shooooo sweet ...shweet as sugar, shweet as honey, shweet as the Godiva chocolates that i love to death:nw:
    it was a nice poem, my dear:beer:
    and I beat sarat in making a bday thread!!!! finally!!:rock:
  16. guns_n_gore

    guns_n_gore hell raiser

    three cheers
  17. #iR@


    @ abhi... lol... thx and hope u feeling more like URSELF now! hehe

    @ garima... THX GURL! luv ya all :rule:

    @ angela... yipeeeee! thx SIS!!!!!!!! u rock! :rock:

    @ gun ... thx! :dance:

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