a medical love-letter

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Dec 29, 2005.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i saw this mathematitians love letter in the chit chat thread... that was cool..
    it reminded me of my medical love letter once i wrote for our college magazine
    it was also published there..wud like to share it wit u..

    i know for non-medico it might be boring...but..
    hope people who can understand this can enjoy n appreciate my stupid attempt...

    btw GMC (grant medical college) is name of our college..


    to my GMC gal,

    hey MBBS gal
    we have met its our fate
    u're causative agent
    of my present day state

    i was apperently assymptomatic
    until u came into my life
    i'll be conscious, well oriented
    if u'll become my wife

    the way u make me feel
    its the first time ever
    and ur every single touch
    creates step ladder fever

    just thinking about u
    gives me palpable thrill
    which just can not be cured
    by any drug or pill

    the way u look at me
    gives me Complete Heart Block
    the 'doc' cant wake me up
    even with DC shock

    u create such a heat
    i feel im in hot air oven
    u dont know ur potentials
    u're AK 47

    my condition is such
    that CT, USG cant scan
    Color Doppler even confused
    from my life, colors have ran

    any manifestations
    this love syndrome can show
    signs n symptoms of which
    even WHO* doesnt know (*World health organisation)

    my regular drug schedule
    is ur sweet cute smile
    it wont create toxicity
    if i'll take extra dose for while

    without anaesthesia
    you operate on my heart
    you dont even care
    when post-OP complication start

    ur adverse effet is such
    that my BP falls straight
    murmur is of grade 4
    and palpitations are great

    you shud have known by this time
    i'm known case of hear break
    dont do systemic examination
    atleast history can u take

    your anatomy is so good
    so ur physiology will be
    can we match our biochemistry
    and wait for while and see

    when someone looks at you
    it provokes such a rage
    my heart beats so wild as
    it will break open rib cage

    your VER (Visually Evoked Response)
    triggers such a wild emotions
    your every single touch
    soothing like calamine lotion

    u r encroachin on my brain
    like malignant neoplasm
    the statistics of ur figure
    makes my heart go into spasm

    the moment i have plotted
    graph of ur curves
    tingling-numbness started
    in every inch of my nerves

    so hey pretty DOC
    tell me wats the diagnosis
    whats ur management
    can u handle case like this

    coz i've heard from all
    GMC gals r gr8
    they r beat of every heart
    n rhythm of pulse rate

    hey dont u try to think
    we GMC guy r not fine
    you r susceptible to me
    one day i'll make u mine

    thanks for the efforts to read it all..........
  2. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    I like that......hey, u r so gonna be a doc in less than 2 months for sure.........is ur poem reaally an incident that u have came across since u r gonna be a doc soon:p:
    good going......
    epecially, i liked the part of the step ladder fever........ :beer:
  3. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    he he...nice find..
    btw nimisha,you are a medico?...wow...a medico-shayar....how do you get time?
  4. shantanukr

    shantanukr yEh DiL mAanGe m0rE

    aahhhh .. very big but very GOOD ..

  5. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i dont believe all of u read it....
    hey thanks for ur efforts to read it.... :nw:

    n double thanks for ur praise :nw: :nw:

    angel..... not inspired by incidence dear... wish it wud hav been ;)

    hardik... time ka kya hai... nikaal lete hai...agar aap praise karenge to hum sara time poetry likhne me laga de....
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  6. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member


    from bp to ct scan

    really nice one

    i did not know that u were a doc??

    already graduated or abt to become one??
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    about to be....
    in two months from now.......
  8. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member


    congrats in advance me still got time for my graduation.....

  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    haha.. good one! esp coz u wrote it urself! :beer:
  10. flyingbird

    flyingbird New Member

    ha ha ha
    its really very funny
    enjoyed very much
  11. lan12

    lan12 New Member

    Hey nimisha! I liked it, although I did not understand some part of it..This was good post coz u wrote it by yourself..and congratulations in advance for getting graduated...:)
  12. PakPride

    PakPride New Member

    hey nimisha that was great

    a guitarist, shayar, and future doctor...multitalented! (i think thats a word :S)

    Congrats and good luck!
  13. rams+ein

    rams+ein New Member

    A doc with a shayari angle and looks to boot.......man m wondering why arent i ill?

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