A love song-My attempt at it..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by siddarth_d, May 2, 2007.

  1. siddarth_d

    siddarth_d New Member

    Hey gal, you left me coz you think
    I was broke
    I was a joke
    I was just another bloke
    I was the one who stole your sleep
    I was the reason you fell in a heap
    I was the reason your emotions took a leap


    Chorus
    Gal that ain`t rite,you got it all wrong
    Gal you must have given me a chance to write you a song
    You dunno how much i luv u,how much I adore you,
    You are my angel, to the riddle called life, you are my only clue

    Gal,
    You are the only one
    under the shining sun
    You were my life
    My only partner in strife
    You were my rock
    I was the ship you were the dock


    Chorus
    Gal that ain`t rite,you got it all wrong
    Gal you must have given me a chance to write you a song
    You dunno how much i luv u,how much I adore you,
    You are my angel, to the riddle called life, you are my only clue

    Gal Why did you leave me,why did u go away
    Why dint u give me another chance to say
    That I love you more than anything else
    More than my own self
    Come back to me,I shall erase the past
    We shall love each other till we are humanity`s last
     
  2. god of guitar85

    god of guitar85 GUITARPLAYER

    hey man i liked it. tht was cool stuff!!!! looking 2 read sum more 4m u!!!
     
  3. god of guitar85

    god of guitar85 GUITARPLAYER

    man i checked all ur written stuff and i'm quite impressed wid u!!!!!! i'll try 2 compose one of your song!!!!
     
  4. siddarth_d

    siddarth_d New Member

    Thx buddy!
     

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