a lonely crowd...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Nov 6, 2010.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    just wondering..y a crowd is so lonely
    is eating..drinking ...nd making merry life's motive only..?
    tody d whole world glitters nd shines
    yet i here remain incosed in my own personal confines...
    too much of merriness...too much ov cheer
    everythin is so damn perfect yet der is dis bloody fear..
    ppl laugh..ppl smile
    nd to get used to it..i guess i really do need a wile..
    hugs nd kisses r showered on me
    yet i m lost smwher fa away in my own mental engrossing journy..
    i tried to ignore.. i tried to fyt
    bt smhow cud not get away wid dis unreasoned plyt..
    everyone's happy yet i m sad
    i tried everthin' bt nthin's able to make me glad..
    i guess i need to be wateva everyone wants me to b
    i guess i need to get out ov dis misery
    bt i still do wonder..y is d crowd so lonely...
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    its so damn good...
    its so bad to feel lonely in a huge crowd...
    great lines...
  3. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    exactly my feelings, you've expressed so beautifully..good work nandy!
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnx a ton both ov u.. :) :)

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