A life destroyed...

^That so made my day, i'm gonna walk around grinning:grin: Thank you :grin:

 

^lol... np man... u just keep riting!

 

*tries to read*
**Realises her vocab is poor and she needs a dictionary **
Awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My critic tring to take over eh?....:
Excellent work.
I got ur mesg.. rushed here... couldnt have missed it in the world... nor could i have missed it for revenge...(realises how many poems are pending for proof reading work for you : )

 

^@IR Heh, after such a warm response, of course ma cherie :grin:

 

@varshita didi, thank you, your proofreader sucks, you dont, yay for that :grin:

 

Anytime kiddo !!

 

absolutely loved these lines and the poem as a whole...plz keep writing...:rock: ..you'll increase my vocab (yes i looked it up too)........the last time i looked up the dictionary in this forum was for shsnawada's poems...*remembers how he had to struggled to understand those*..but yours was awesome...keep writing!!:beer:

 

^Oh wow, this is amazing, thank you so very much....i will keep writing.

 

Awesome poem man....... (i dont believe that its your first attempt at writing). Am i the only one who didnt have to look up the dictionary :think: (had to read it twice though).

Great work though. I liked the wordiness (mainly because er.....)

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MESHUGGAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

^lol, you'll get tired of me saying this very soon, but i swear by my life, yesterday 12:15 A.M was the first time i ever tried to write a poem, and this was the result at 12:33 A.M, thank you very much bro, i highly appreciate it and looks like you're the only one who escaped the use of a dictionary :grin: Cheers :beer:

 

No man .. ur not da only one .. everyone else .. INCLUDING disturbed himself had to look up to it (to find such words) :

 

^Notty, he said he didnt look. And i confess i got the word tenebrous off a thesaurus

 

hey

the only thing you missed was.............................nothing.

i liked:

"My life, i have given
Laid at your feet
In hope of a fleeting convalescence
Yet here i lie, in my blood
That i have shed, to recieve a translucent disposition
With you watching silently, in numbed joy"

iknow how it feels and who says its not factual......disturbed u better say the truth dude....

 

^lol, darn it, you people are stripping the poem bare....there exist some parallels, but nothing so drastic, i assure you. Thank you:grin:

 

Ahhhh :.. he said didn't didn't he :


I think i'm doin a lotta computers these days :Worried:

 

Theres nothing wrong in doing that. If he didnt quite find a word that he wanted to use and taht fits, there's nothing wrong in finding the word (doesnt matter where you find it).











(well, actually the reason i support is because i did it myself (two words))

 

^@notty lol, might well be true
@shsnawada, hehe, :beer:

 

Awrritteey dude...
heres a post for the thread

Loved it terribly. And i hpe you're checkin out that site!!!! Im so proud of ya *big hug* Sorry for not having seen this a tee wee bit sooner..give me a buzz when u write another one :grin:

 

:grin: I do believe this might be the best post all day! Thank you, i submitted it to the site, but lol, i doubt if it'll get anywhere: Thank ye sis!

 

great

good work, it has great depths