Mom,please dont go away Leaving away dad After long years of being togther... And making me feel as orphan as well Plz dont leave me too.... The pride in your eyes while holding me as newborn along with dad still i can see in the snap which got broken when you throw the things before leaving the house The marriage vows which you both had taken is asking you to keep promises, to keep you to come back to live togther please dont hate me as well... Please come back The life being without mother has made me worthless too... dont go this way leaving the mark on my innocence and crushing it forever... please ..please have mercy on your daughter as well dont punish your bunny.. dad treated me as alien and threw me out of house saying to go with you and then cried holding me in his arms i have never seen dad crying the way i have seen..... dad still loves you that he said to me.....believe me.. plz come back now.... after so many years emotions has not left his heart and still he loves you.... there is always a place for you..... mom,dont let me cry too as i cannot survive without you both... i dont want to know why you left but you always said that everything is possible when a person tries to do... nothing is impossible... mom ,then let do it again we ..togther.....you and dad will try .... promise i will not disturb you and make you angry.... please come back..... i dont want to curse you all the time in these growing years for the pain i am getting being linked to you .. i cannot ask the death for the feeling that i am going in my life now ...mom you can come and stop that feeling to grow and dont want myself to be hated and known as daughter of you.... dad still loves you and you as well..... dont hate your bunny, come hold me in your arms waiting for you along with dad on the door of our sweet home... i know you will come you always said ..everything is possible and i always believed you .... rohit
wow.... one HAS to go through all this to be able to rite so well about such a topic... but if u didnt(which i hope) dis is some great work! just THINKING about ma mom leaving nearly kills me... :
I disagree that you have to go through something to be able to write about it even in a case like this. The idea is heart breaking but I feel you havent done a good enough job writing this. In my opinion just the plight of the girl makes this special and not your words. This doesnt mean that I dont like this just that it could have been better.
very sweet lines very sweet words u have wrote 10/10 marks. if some one read this heartdly the tears come to his eyes automatically very nice.jitni taref ki jaaye kam hai