A Killer Romance with my ciggerates

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by shashankgothic, Jul 3, 2009.

  1. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    I'll light you up baby
    You know I'll set you on fire
    You know what I say is true
    Because I've never been a liar

    I'm gonna let you inside me
    Once again, I don't care if it kills
    I love everything about you
    Especially how your smoothness feels

    Your an addiction I don't wanna be without
    You always make me feel so good
    I'll suck up every ounce of you
    Just like I know I should

    In a crowd or all alone
    The thrill of getting caught make it exciting
    The adrenalin turns me on
    Like an unexpected bolt of lightening

    I'll set you out like a prostitute
    Passing you around the group
    They all want what you have to offer
    You know you can calm the troop

    And they'll be coming back
    Cuz they all know your the best
    They'll keep asking me for more
    Never leaving me to rest

    Yet you know what we have
    Will be ending soon
    But before I put you out
    I'll look up at the moon

    And think of the day that passed by
    As I linger with you butt in my hand
    I know I'll be back to you soon
    Cuz baby, we both know you're in high demand
     
  2. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    for all the ciggerate loversssss ___________
     
  3. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    yaaaron koi reply karega howzzz it???????????????????????????????
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good one
    i liked the way u carried the imagination further...that pasiing on thing
    Sorry for not responding ...ws actually a bit tied-up this week, will try to comment on all ur works posted here :-E...keep rocking
     
  5. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    thanx dude
    very very very long awaited reply
     
  6. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    ???????????? no ciggi lovers on igt??
     
  7. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    its good but somehow i feel this one is not ur composition...
     
  8. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    and like always i'm right.. here's the source..

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/3224548

    dude kindly dont steal and post here... it doesn't makes sense..

    ...and spelling of cigarettes is wrong...thats ur only contribution in this post and that too mis-spelt...
     
  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    @ rikky ... good catch.

    @ shashankgothic .. dude are you so starved for appreciation, but yeah thxs for putting this poem here atleast I could read it.

    on the poem ... amazing imagery and a very very authentic topic
     
  10. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    well I can back off a little .... shashank never wrote, that it was his composition.

    shashank is that what you are gonna say in your defence.
     
  11. Harsh Kumar

    Harsh Kumar The Official IGT Jester

    can i use stuff from here to make a song??
     
  12. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    yes u can..but make sure u dont copy the copied stuff.. the original composer might sue u... :)
     
  13. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    If people were sued over copied stuff then all our Music Composers would have had Life Imprisonment by now.


    Use it carefully and mention the source and author if possible.

    You never know if your song gets hit then author may come up calling for royality

    Best of Luck
     
  14. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    ...and i used to think if u copy a copywrited stuff u might get sued...my bad !!!
     
  15. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    hey i dont want 2 b the deefence counsel.........but
    we rily dont know if fallenstar588 over there is the same guy here??????

    odrwise 'tis a rilly evil deed on his part
     
  16. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    well thats a very rare chance...1 in a million i guess..
     
  17. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    I wouldn't change my "pseudo name" on my different blogs. anyway whatever...
     
  18. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^me too,...normally

    but my name here's far too good not to change!
     
  19. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    hey guys i never said it is my composition
     
  20. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Iam glad you dint say that.
    So many have fallen pray to plagiarism in this forum just for few good comments.
     

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