' A Dead Leaf...! '

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Apr 27, 2006.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Have you ever picked up a fallen leaf in autumn and left it in your diary
    as a bookmark...?


    I have...!

    The maple tree has embraced
    the colour of fire gifted
    by the autumn season…
    It conquers the eyes
    and invades the heart…!

    Slowly it strips itself
    and allows pieces of its regal dress
    to fall to its feet
    because it knows that every heart
    has its special pages loved to be read…

    And each fallen leaf wants to be
    the mute witness of that moment,
    marking the beloved sheet of paper
    to help a dream to come back
    from where it had been left,
    and to rest cradled among pages,
    in shelter from rain and wind…

    Not more a mere dead leaf,
    but a sweet gift of nature…
    it seems to be alive with pulsating veins
    of a well known hand
    whose fragile touch caresses the rhymes...

    I would like to be a fallen leaf
    picked up by you at the feet
    of a autumn denuded tree…!


    Amanush...

    :)
     
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  2. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    u did justice 2 ur custom title.

    reps 4 u. :")

    keep it up! wonderful work! :)
     
  3. swapnali

    swapnali New Member

    A Dead Leaf

    Nice poem Abhi. It reminds me of the past n i cry.
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    badae kareene se likhi hai ....bahut khoob...
     
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    that was a 'Wow' thing.....very well written...keep it up !!!
     
  6. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    WOW>>>:shock:

    :grin:
     
  7. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Where have you been
    donno if i qualify to ask that question..
    anwy

    its been a long time i read your poems
    i liked this one aswell

    Take care!
    :)
     
  8. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hmmm...its tough to find words to qualify as a compliment..so i better leave it this time!

    Reps if i can

    btw..we dont have maple trees in India..wish we had em..i would've definitely used a dried leaf as d bookmark..hmmmmm
     
  9. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi amanush,
    excellent stuff from you.
    you are the shining star of IGT.
    excellent,keep going keep writing.

    reps for you.

    regards,
    Souman
     
  10. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    beautiful poem....

    keep up the good work...
     
  11. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    And each fallen leaf wants to be
    the mute witness of that moment,
    marking the beloved sheet of paper
    to help a dream to come back
    from where it had been left,
    and to rest cradled among pages,
    in shelter from rain and wind…

    these r the best line.....too good
     
  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    lovly poem amanush ji..
     
  13. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    AWESOME! :beer:
     

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