hello everyone..... another poem....... DO COMMENT ON IT PPL! as i always say.... ALL SORTS OF REPLIES are welcomed!!!!!!!!!!!! so here goes....... u guys JUST BE HONEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A DAY’S JOURNEY! The sun emerges from the never-ending ocean, Spreading it’s rays throughout the landscape, I see it all from my broken window… The palm trees reaching for the sky, The children playing in the sand, I see it all from my broken window… The surfers playing with their lives, The waves growing stronger and stronger, I see it all from my broken window… The ship reaching the bay, Ending the day’s journey, I see it all from my broken window… The sun submerging in the ocean again, The burning (orangish) sky, I see it all from my broken window… Adding grimness in the air, As the darkness takes over, I see it all from my broken window… The shimmering moon ruling the nite, The shinning stars busy worshipping it, I see it all from my broken window, I see it all from my broken window! DON"T FORGET TO COMMENT even if u think it sucks!!!!!! :
jaani's too hungry for comments : nice one there.. keep writing... btw.. where is that broken window... lemme also see
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