A Challenge!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by walk_alone, Jul 13, 2010.

  1. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Its great that each of us is contributing in their resepective capacity to keep this thread going.

    Here is a challenge to keep it interesting. I will give a title to which each one of us have to come up with a poem. Its not a competition ...

    " Rain Rain, Come again "

    Get your grey cells going ....
  2. suprita

    suprita New Member

    no posta!!! cmon all u really good poets out der... its a challenge!!!
    i logged in to dis place after sooo many days n not much seems to hav changed... y did ppl suddenly stop posting...
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    when i see u i am reminded either of happiness or of momories that bring pain
    oh yeah i am talkin' about you oh rain
    as i see the li'l bubbles on that plain surface
    it sets my mind thinkin' yet all i can say is oh rain rain come again...
    i travel into a different time as you pour down from the eternal sky
    i wish to be just as innocent .. just as pure..just as beautiful...
    bt all i manage to say when i see is oh my my..!!!
    you remind me of soooo many things in my life
    but rather than thinkin' about them all i think is that you are soo beautiful wherever you lay either on a rose bud....or a slaughter knife...
    i always cry when i feel you on my cheeks...
    there is nothin' more tranquil than it in the world...i guess the only one who dun' like you are geeks...
    in the end i really dun' care if u remind me of happiness or of pain...
    all i want to say is oh rain rain....come again..!
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    hmmm... Nice try!
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnk u.. ^_^

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