A Breath...!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Amanush..., Jun 17, 2005.

  1. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    You made the ears to the pages of my heart
    while I fixed the shade of your look,
    it was then that I understood:
    it would have been the last time

    " Perhaps it is better like this”
    a sentence of circumstance
    that it is not suitable
    to your manner of speaking
    I know what you try to hide
    I know that it is not what you want

    Castles of papers that collapse
    to the whistling wind
    and that hisses through the cracks
    of my weeping eyes
    The smoke of a cigarette to break
    the dense attenuate air of tears
    and distant thoughts

    Yes !It was yesterday that
    I knew how to take a breath…

    BubblyMartini and death angel like this.
  2. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    and your breath STINKS....
  3. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    Truthfully the poem (or whatever) rocks. Im kinda jealous of you....
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Hey Nice poem
    n a nice name too:)
  5. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

  6. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    @ Death Angel...!Your first reply shocked me...! :shock: I kept thinking what was wrong with the poem.Was about to logout when accidently I scrolled down and my face gave birth to a large smile...!
    Thanks for appreciating my work and you do write well too...believe me.

    @ BubblyMartini...!Thanks for reading and appreciating my poem...Nice to know that you like my name...! ;) Be not deceived by appearance...Amanush means a cruel person.

    Take care both of you and keep coming!

    See you soon

  7. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    AMANUSH means not human. It can mean a rat or a cockroach or anything. Most of the people confuse it with inhumane ie cruel.
    Bye RAT
  8. death angel

    death angel the messenger from hell

    JOKING pyaare,
    nothing of the sort amanush can be interpreted as cruel too. But from now on ill call you RAT. Okay? RAT! hmmm... RAT
    its kinda cool you know RAT.
    MAZZAAK! learn to laugh.
    lets laugh now:
    ha ha ha
    he he he
    ha he ha
    he ha he
    hoo hoo hoo
    he hoo he
    hoo he hoo
    muha ha ha hah ha ha ha
    cackle cackle cackle (didn't know how to write THAT)

    if you actually laughed while reading this (which im sure you did) then plz gimme rep points.
  9. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Well...D.A Ji! What a coincidence...!According to my birthdate I found in some thread here,I discovered that I am Mouse! :) Btw...Naam main kya rakha hai ?A rose is a rose is a rose...hai na? Kante ko agar phoul kaheinge, to wo kanta hi rahega...!
    Thanks for making me laugh...You made my day! :beer:

    Take care...ok?


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