A Beautiful Poetry

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Jan 23, 2011.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    This is undoubtedly one of my most favourites. I hope the one its for likes it. Every line has been carefully moulded, every word depicts her.

    So many words can't say you,
    and the place you hold for me.
    Every word you say that goes,
    into my heart to forever be.

    And the long strands of your hair,
    the kiss of curl over your eyes;
    the twinkling light that they do hide,
    a loving stare, austere inside.

    A thousand miles never foresaid;
    The warmth your eyes would never miss.
    The pleasant kiss of a serenade,
    sung unto you through my lips.

    The sweetened hotness in your cheeks,
    your closing eyes, your bowing head,
    the rosy shades, the shying; Speaks
    of a silence you hide, solemnly betrayed.

    Distances couldn't stop your love so true,
    permeate through to my tender soul.
    And time just passed so fleeting by,
    felt to be but never told.

    So long begone the heartful romances,
    Into my mind would never free;
    The sight of you, your soulful song,
    your picture, a beautiful poetry.
  2. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    one of your best dude!
    i sooo wanna rep it...hats off to you...
    its artistic in every sense...wonderful..
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks man...this poetry means a lot to me...a lot...
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    this was awsome...i liked the shadowed/ unsaid sort of thing that the lines hold

    keep posting!!
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Thanks dude...i dunno what made me write this...the more i read it, the more i fall in love...and there's a stream of pleasant memories...and then a pang of loneliness...
  6. higneevevot

    higneevevot New Member

    your newest member

    haha, good one dude
  7. Buu forever

    Buu forever New Member

    Its great.....Reminds me of MLTR.They have some lovely songs.My fav is 25 minutes.I love that song.Love u MLTR.
  8. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^yeah,..MLTR...i used to be a great fan sometime back...just recently heard 'em songs again and liked them...

    @higneevevot....why the laugh?? :-?
  9. Maxnumar

    Maxnumar New Member

    Heres a thread wehre I will post some of my own work in progress.

    Im shit at poetry, thought Id let you know.

    See what I mean? Those first two lines dont even rhyme

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