these lyrics are written by me these lyrics are suited for metal and gothic music, so n-joi and give ur comments ~The dark day~ The third eye invades the invertebrate On grounds of flesh and river of snakes The masters slave give call to the dark To detorate the heaven and bring the war The rage to kill and spell in the hands The lie of the mortal face him to his death The creatures of shadow and monsters of sand Rise immortality in fate of the man The deadly wizards and filthy nights The beasty warriors and heads of fight The smell of the blood, the hear of the sorrow The grey and the black to fill up tommarow The cry of the poor, the eyes of the weak With death all around and nothing to peek The greedy temptation of intoxication The need of frustation of devil demolition The feudal setup to break upon To rise the angel or face the dawn The growth of the weed of truth or destruction To merge evolution of cosmopolition The apocalyptic, the anti-addicted The knot of the hands make it magnetic To crush the soul, to kill the insane To free the mortal from cage of un nammed ....... to be continued ================================ ~The Hell day~ Blood bath the angel corpse Regenerate life through dead mobs Curse the black soul of hell fire Hold the peace to stay in heart of liar Blind smoke of agony in hand Spread like a history in the chain Equip with armour of the trust Destroy the burial grounds beneath the crust March with the enemy to fight against lord Spill venom rage in spell on the ultimate ward Rise the evil spectre in cover of the dark Bless the night of stars in the killers park Encrypt the code of death to light the black Burn the faith and head to smack Eat the eyes with vision to win Megalomaniac makes the devil spin Rip and torn the anti-evil Dig the faith of mortal to trivial Spend the thrust on crashing the life Give the answer for noone to strive ill soon write some more lyrics..sorry my first lyrics is incomplete but soon ill complete it...and u can give ur suggestions also what else can i write in it..i have some more lyrics but ill write them l8r on..till then keep rollin'
The dark day...1st stanza ..you used a lot of imagination in describing the senario then the 2nd one has haphardness of thoughts so..waht can come next may be a contrasting serene calm cold dead dream ! alll in all 6 out of 10