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i bet ur guessing i dont name my poems
but heres another one i did yester...yeh i sound unhappy in it but now i feel a lot better

I’m bruised
Aching in pain
The blood oozing out,
From my hollow arms.
I cry these empty tears alone
In the corner I sit, filthy and disgraced.
Dark light covers me in shadow,
Just a part of the background I become.
The shattered glass lies beneath my feet,
Scratching everything away.
The starlight sways gently,
Rocking the day to sleep.
Yet leaving my eyes open to watch this scene.

 

nice .. but y unnamed still.. think of a name and name it soon... it'll look much betta with a name...

 

hahaha i shall think of a name....u got any suggestions?

 

Really nice, browneygurlie. But I feel U should name it.

 

wild guess for the name...

EVERYDAY

 

^liking it ...liking it a lot

 

what?? the name???

 

@browney, so, are U naming it now?

 

the first poem was named Dead Fish.. this one can be named Damn I broke the mirror again... what am gonna do now?!

 

hahhaa lol yeh i think everyday sounds pretty cool but if any1 has any other suggestions it always welcome

 

nice one , keep it without a name , would sound better ,...

 

yeah... mez agree with bobby there...
amazing poem tho

 

Nice poem browneyegurlie