4me 4u 4the night

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Mar 10, 2009.

  1. big malls are like
    big girls
    with so much body, for eyes

    Fashion streets are like
    tall guys
    watching-things, over a height

    music shops are like
    shy boyz
    singing some-song, all night

    green parks are like
    old couples
    with leamontree, over the side

    Pubs bars are like
    messed women
    went for dark, got light

    Restuants are like
    old teens
    flasing sarees along the sides

    Lone beach are like
    what u say ?
    4me 4u 4the night
     
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    makes me wonder how creative you can become! thats a beautiful work.....

    but temme ..........

    I am like........???
     
  3. kuns200

    kuns200 New Member

    its amazing...................
    I belong to music shop....
     
  4. thanks...all
     
  5. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    monie is really poet/poetess among us...
    better work..
     
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @avisingh
    actually there is no word like 'poetess'/......
    ummm....but I agree with you!,..
    monnie is a nice poet, in fact, cool and straight-forward, but can be complicated as and when she wishes....likes to use poems as 'relief valves' (sorry for the example, am a marine engineer, so.....)
     
  7. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    @horsie..
    yaar as far as I know the meaing of poetess is A woman who is a writer of poems
     
  8. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^
    yea I looked for it...there is something like that.....my bad
     
  9. thanx guyzzzzzzzzzz...beer 4 all
     

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