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my soul has been lost
I am going to die
and all I need is for no one to cry
no one drove me to end this game
apart from me myself to end this pain
you try to stop me but you won't succed
for the pain i have will slaughter me
you blame yourselves but I have been hurled
into the depths of hell beyond this world
DONT CRY FOR MY UNFORGIVEN LIFE AT MY FUNERAL LAUGH MAKE THE
GOOD TIMES LAST..........YOURS REGRETFULLY ALONE AND UNCHIERISHED

SHASHANK

 

Plzzzz this is my own work i hv been writing since 2 years ..,,,, i want ur feedback

 

Honestly,
u r very talanted,
but this is just not that great.
It's not Death stuff, but mayb i cant understand it as u wanna say it,
as i see it, it's a 6 on 10!

 

thanxx harsh . i respect ur views. will surely give u more gud stuff

 

i am looking for a lyircs to some of my stuff too.
I am no writer and i dont wanna be a musician with crappy lyrics.

It's a soft acoustic kind of thing,
I like to call it "Dreams"

Also theres a song by my band, kind of death metal, we call it "Separated"
lyrics still awaited.

If u can help than great!!

 

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