in fight of myriad survives the fittest outpowers rest wins the best grows with care in a sacred lair nurtures and nourishes ... Pain and hope with clutched fingers screams, prays and the body shivers Gods have smiled ... ______________________________________________________________ very simple without any pomp and glow. criticism in any form is welcome
its....simple....nd sweet... ..nd btw...wher hav u dissapeared these days..u dun' comment as such on ny of d poems of the forum...is all ok??
till the poem is delivering the msg clearly...it's good and this one is short yet delivering the msg...so it's good too i had to read the second part thrice to understand it...u can hold my state of mind responsible for that
Thxs Nandy and Sukriti, I have been busy for a while, will definitely read and post my comments soon. I wrote this poem in flat 5 minutes while reading about "theory of evolution" by Charles Darwin. I hope all undestand the analogy.
I liked the way you have recited ... small steps...cheers for that ! not much was said in the poem.. i wounder waht can one say bout this .. in essance is a extension of the thoguth process whcih describes gods fetish to watch the people on earth in misery and enjoy... Darwin is one of my fav oldie ..and wahtever he siad had no emotions ( science is an explanation of observed) ... gods and destiny all dont fit there.. But all in all i like it ..just beacuse its a new way of looking at the thingie
