those moments...

Discussion in 'Introduce Yourself' started by abhimanyu gupta, May 25, 2010.

  1. abhimanyu gupta

    abhimanyu gupta New Member

    she was so close this heart...
    one who bring smile to this heart...
    now she left be without.. giving me a chance to say...
    but it's far too late she was gone away....
    every night this heart cry while going to sleep...
    thinking why every moment has to be so hard....
    my heart fall jst for u n u...
    i don't want this heart to make u lose...
    u was tough so much jst crushing my heart...
    thinking why those moments gone so wide apart...
    jst give me a chance to make u love...
    jst give me a chance to make u mine...
    although this heart never shown u this love...
    but jst give me a chance to make me right...

    it's not complete yet...still poetic sense is missing...bt wanna share to ask for some additions to make it better....once it's complete then me and guys gonna get it on our guitar...
     
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^
    okay FYI, this is the wrong place, goto the poetry forum, where ppl wud actully read n appreciate/comment on tht.
     

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