THE YEARNING How I'd love to write you a poem, when you'd come unto fill my heart's Emptiness. Till then, these weary eyes wander and the soul strays away in Wilderness. I cant pretend anymore to befriend the pinching loneliness around. While i lurk amidst the pace of time and race of crowd. All i needed was a loving look and all i yearned for was a gentle touch. But at the end, atlast i find myself comforted by this warmth......The warmth of my own tears..!! ______________________________ After a very long time, i've written a poem and submitted on IGT..my writing style is quite outlandish..but still hope you'll like to drop a comment on how u found it..
Good attempt.. vini,for next time when u post.. plz don't use colors and bold fonts to emphasize the poem..
Thanks would u mind explaining me the purpose of so many options of colours n font formats given here then?? Im a member of IGT from more than 3 years..if thats a new "rule"..then my apologies to Admin..otherwise..sorry im not paying u any heed Bye!
Having read poems based on this scenario,the theme isn't really impressive..they all come down to the same..but then again,with poems like these,it's the depiction that counts and you've done a great job.last 2 stanzas are absolutely touching.Honestly.