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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by vini, Aug 24, 2008.

  1. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    THE YEARNING



    How I'd love to write you a poem, when you'd come unto fill my heart's Emptiness.
    Till then, these weary eyes wander and the soul strays away in Wilderness.



    I cant pretend anymore to befriend the pinching loneliness around.
    While i lurk amidst the pace of time and race of crowd.



    All i needed was a loving look and all i yearned for was a gentle touch.
    But at the end, atlast i find myself comforted by this warmth......The warmth of my own tears..!!

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    After a very long time, i've written a poem and submitted on IGT..my writing style is quite outlandish..but still hope you'll like to drop a comment on how u found it..
     
  2. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    Good attempt..

    vini,for next time when u post.. plz don't use colors and bold fonts to emphasize the poem..
     
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Thanks

    would u mind explaining me the purpose of so many options of colours n font formats given here then?? Im a member of IGT from more than 3 years..if thats a new "rule"..then my apologies to Admin..otherwise..sorry im not paying u any heed

    Bye!
     
  4. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Having read poems based on this scenario,the theme isn't really impressive..they all come down to the same..but then again,with poems like these,it's the depiction that counts and you've done a great job.last 2 stanzas are absolutely touching.Honestly.
     
  5. CARLOS SANTANA

    CARLOS SANTANA New Member

    short and effective.
     

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