Falling in love

Sometimes it feels like there is a big void
that I need one more thing to complete my life
I thought it was you
but then it dawned upon me
that your too good to be that thing
I deserve and will end up with
someone thats a piece of trash
something that is as low of a class as me
as bad as you say I am
as evil that you feel I am
I will meet a dog one day
for the bitch you said I am

Sometimes I cry for no reason
as i know i have troubled you the most
but what you dont notice
is how hard I have to force myself
to not to cry in your presence anymore
I never knew that this would end so soon
but then I realized sweet dreams dont last forever,
do they?
you can take the pieces of my heart
and throw them out
I would care too much cause it will hurt a lot
but then I would understand
what pain I made you go through
by forcing my feelings on you

Why did I have to walk into your life?
why did I make that wrong turn?
I was too curious and accidentally fell into a puddle of love
hoping that you are with me in it
but realized it soon that I am in it alone
as you are in a quest for a different zone

Well, they say love hurts
it doesnt, it kills me
Trust me I would never say you killed me
You will never hear me talk you bad
You were the best thing to happen
And life’s best moments can never make me sad

You know you can replace me
you will find zillion others
or maybe you have
And I truly wish from my broken heart
that you will have something bigger, better
something that you actually love
well, I guess it was supposed to turn out this way
and I wish so badly that I could fix it
I thought all my tears had dried up
but now, they just started to pour out of me again
and I dont know if anyone can stop them
I wish that you could

Life wont stop, it never has
I can only try my best
I dont mind coming back again in this world
if you promise to do the impossible
to turn my black roses red again
can you?
or am I just screwing up my life again?
I dont know why but I think
I m falling even more in love with you

 

u have poured down the state of mind into words very well.
nice verse>

 

thanks vini

 

luved the last para... ur lines r clearly forming a picture of wat XACTLY u r trying to say... and i guess THIS IS THE THING U REQUIRE for poetry!

 

thanks...

 

hey vrshta ur feelings ws superb, i like it vry much.

 

Thanks ...