Whipped with thorns, torn pitilessly May you die each day of your life, Cry pain, scream death, bleed tears The way you slayed me every moment May you be slaughtered the same way Screaming for mercy, dying painfully May you live for an eternity The demon has risen in me Just to bestow death upon you With mine own two hands!! Hear you scream painfully Drag you along a dusty and ruffled path All i wish is to avenge my tears, make you feel the same violence in your blood And hear the music of your tormented screams Avenge you for all I went through Just because of you
rocking !!! :rock: who's the one you want to take this on ??? :think: i know a lot of people who want to take it on me ... but i'm sure you're not among them ... REPs added already !!!
@madhuresh... good attempt?????????????????? this is not just a good attempt.. but a fabulous write.. my reps for you himika! (may be i liked it coz, even i wanna take such a revenge on some1 desperately.. u gave me words.. thanks!!)
that'as pretty wild...felt ki i am done...dead in few seconds.... BTW, great expressions...meticulously rendered...awesome... Tacare...hope you never underwent such tortures...Reps added...
@nimisha thanks gurl u write kewl poems too @Sharmontime...thanks for ur concern buddy im ok dont worry thanks for the reps ppl
revenge cant be sweet.. well..views always differ ; ) a little more effort and u could've sent a chill down someones spine.. its good anwys
very nice write ^^ Just 1 thing i aint happy bout The line goes like : With mine own two hands. For me it shud be: With MY own two hands. Feels like a grammatical mistake so just pointed it out.
certainly not a sweet revenge...heh anyways! a bit too gothic poem it is! successfully reflecting the wroth in poet's heart. but i swear it really is quite scary *gulp* as if lyrics of some death metal song..lol reps for sure!
himi ... thank me baby :dance: ... i'm so happy for you ... you are finally getting the right kinda responces dat u deserve !!! ... a small REQ ... can u re-post those poems that i saw, but all the people here are missing ???
The city of Joy, The city of sorrow Driving down the memory lane Wide and narrow Those walks through the wood, About which I still brood Those red uniforms with red ribbons The ice-cream parlours which sold 'bon-bon's The penalty for not doing homework The hooting owls accompanied with dog's bark I remember it all Some vague, some vivid All this reminds me of home Which I left when directed by a call Call from CHC They said we could come, this place has everything But no feeling of home!! I wish I had a chance Chance to return, To my Home! another piece guys put up with me :
this one even good one....par ye sab vaisa hi hai same ...: NIMISHA Ji " @madhuresh... good attempt?????????????????? this is not just a good attempt.. but a fabulous write.. my reps for you himika! (may be i liked it coz, even i wanna take such a revenge on some1 desperately.. u gave me words.. thanks!!) __________________ "........................................hmmm ye SAAS BHI KABHI BAHUU THIS jaise sops ne app ladkiyoon ke dimaak kharaab kar diyen hain...ur girls or chudails ? Try being humane it really tastes good :
