Its great that each of us is contributing in their resepective capacity to keep this thread going. Here is a challenge to keep it interesting....
you are right!!! you are a frustrated little girl and you will GROW UP. HATE is too strong a word for you right now. There is a world to...
I wouldn't comment on lyrics since its just an "outburst". Iam an Atheist, but that doesnt give me any reason to believe, like, hate something...
Its good that you are coming up with something or the other every now and then. Its important to understand your own limitations as a writer so...
I have seen how ugly war or words may get ... "nip it in the bud" thxs all
@akankshya4u ... do really think that you shoul barge in someone else's post like that ..... There are seperate forums for that .
@ nandy ... you can post them .... you dnt need to abstain from anything that you believe in. @ rikkirich and horsesmouth ... please aplogise
I would put it as your style of narration. Its good that you are coming up with these lines, they atleast help your mind to brew...
we are here as critique to make our point, not argue what other say. That right should be reserved to "'thread creater" alone.
nice analogy, good stuff
its a lovy dovy muchy shushy stuff, what is words like "tok", "dis", "dat". there is no charecter linit here so you can put full words.
with all due respect to you state of mind I must say this is not any form of poetry, just a way to release urself from suffocation. I wdn't...
thxs again ...
Thxs Monica ... cheers!!!
Thxs Nandy and Sukriti, I have been busy for a while, will definitely read and post my comments soon. I wrote this poem in flat 5 minutes while...
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