Nothing and no one is going to stop me from loving him...not my parents...not anybody...he's permanantly engraved in my heart...not merely sketched... to be easily erased!....frustration and sorrow and pure love...a mix of emotions created this poem...had to release my stress somehow...check it...
Has someone ever been out of contact with you for even the slightest amount of time ...and you start to worry???..Even i have left people in suspense before...
well here's a poem about the torments of suspense...
"Deadly Suspense"
minutes...hours...days have...
COMMENTS N SUGGESTIONS PLEEZ...!
"Blessed Smile"
People smiling all around...
Looking deeper ...much feelings found...
A smile can be a quick disguise....
for one whose heart in sorrow cries...
A smile can be a warning sign ...
that someone's got a naughty mind...
A smile that's...
hey esgadillion...I like your bully poem dude...! its more artistik and professional...mine was a result of boredom...
...and sadly ...ya the people mentioned in my poem are real...
thank you all for the compliments....whoa vini didi...my poem tuchd yu that much :shock: ...n e how...i am glad it conveyed the emotion....
...when we miss our luvs...we get sad...its onlee natural...yu see he's already in my heart....but i want him in my arms....missin him too much...
:dance: way to go Hardik!!!!...i was stuck on the 'painless operation' one and the 'ready for anything one'...yur either genious or yu had the answer key.... :p:
yes nimisha...in yur own dear words....that come from BOTH our hearts...."its him its him its him i miss!"...(div and nimisha hug and sob together...)
too tru...missin the one yu luv sucks...but lookin on the bright side ...atleast i hav him in my life...i am blessd...
awesome poem nimisha...i like it a lot...you are so talented...able to create excellent poetry in both hindi and english...some are good at only one or the othr...but yu do both very well...
excellent poem Amanush ji...i am an emotional mess as is..always writing emotional poems...so when I read this...its touchiness is overwhelming dude...(watery eyes...sniffly nose...) gimme a kerchief now!!!...you are too good....!!!
i kno i can count on yu...we are best friends aftr all....and now soul sisters...(as corny as that sounds)...who both have our luvs across the ocean...just our luck na?;)...glad you liked the poem dear...
this poem is amazing....really conveys the emotion well...
I like this part:
"I will never forget you...nor will I try...go-go my dear just leave me ...though my heart cries."
its a really touchy situation...she is leaving yu physically...but your love is everlasting...its too sweet...I...
i sat the othr night and was recalling the multiple characters i've encountered during grade school...n started this poem...it goes up to grade six with litl bullies i've met...hmm...let's get this poem to go up to GRADE 12!...and tell about bullies othr than one's i've met...i've done up to...
hey evryone...kinda sad here...(typical divya feeling)...
ever want to see sumone rite away n couldn't...missd them terribly?...well at this point i wish i had a private jet to take me to my love n e time i wanted....the result of this loneliness=tears ...and a mushy poem.... :shock: ...see...
wow...this poem is awesome....
I especially like:
the world can be so small...
the world can be a beautiful place to live...
the world can be just YOU and ME...
thats a tru feelin wen ones in luv....