your laughter’s like a gentle stream through my heart it flows takes away all the pain cleanses all my woes your eyes are like a...
Hey thanx dear...I was just tryin to iron out the Sweet smart innocent raw thoughts...they certainly do have a spark..lets just say we just made...
Hmm..first get rid of the puntuation marks and 'th from ur writing. Hey I've just tried to redo ur poem..trying hard to keep intact What u want to...
Hmm...to tell u frankly...I didnt like it because..i kinda got lost as to what u want to say..u should always keep a poem simple, use lesser words...
Hmm..the ideas was nice.. reads a like an english ghazal to me. but the thoughts really dont come through as well. Here's my version..this...
Well..@laxmikant you can use the sonnet, but was never meant to be a song...anyways i am cool if can do anything interesting out of it..!...
Hey thanks monika for the aprreciation...hmm..actually its intented to be in an hourglass format, but it's not showing that way on this forum.
Hey thanks monika for the aprreciation...hmm..actually its intented to be in an hourglass format, but it's not showing that way in this forum
Hi everyone, I am back after a long time..well some might remember me(idefixe)..actually i lost my password, so had to register again as a new...
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