the sun shown bright on her face illuminating every feature imparting it more grace the long thick lashes challenging the stability of my breath the lustrous pink lips made me insane the big brown eyes screamed for attention and depth i stood there frozen staring at the angel, innate what was she? an angel? a devil? she couldn't be human, definitely not from a distance it seemed i traveled her soul i knew it when she flipped her long black mane she was the devil a devil unnamed a devil untamed refuting in her sheer beauty i stood still she went away blinking away my world away with a single sway a simple gaze became the thirst of my life for a night i was there hypnotized by the innocence the laugh was magic and i was captivated the first look took my heart away and it never then came back stayed there forever content in the anonymity not trying to overcome the thirst of that gaze..
lol naaah..that's from a guy's point of view i am perfectly straight..though i wont mind appreciating another girl's beauty
The way others see is always fascinating .. Nice one Nandy .. @Monica - Some of your work are outstanding ...
I was confused in these four lines... -refute doesn't seem to match the line, or maybe i can't interpret it. -and 'away' needs to be corrected away... nice lines... And I'm quite sure while writing this you imagined a guy looking at yourself when you would be in your full flair... am I right?
I don't think it happens this way. The intuitive meter in a guy evaluates the whole picture, sets the tongue wagging, and then the conscious brain justifies by seeing eyes/lips/stuff etc
well in that case human brain acts pretty fast.. so technically this isn't the "first" look according to you ..
Yea, I do remember my teenage years...you're right..definitely! ;-) and frankly, still don't know whether it was love or infatuation.