Point

a point
dragged
creates a line
a line dragged a plane
a plain sweeps and forms a cube
we all moving to form another dimension..

u asked my point
my point my love is..

u became a point in my pointless abyss
and i dragged it
rest all is just a consequence

 

this all is just a consequence..

 

ahh...beauty in simplicity! love it!

 

Thanks ..

Rest all is just a dimension..

 

I don't understand...
are your comments a correction to the last line or do they mean something else altogether?

 

horseeeeee .. my friend if the poem says that consequences are consequential then a series of poems must come ..right na ..so i am trying to justify my writing .. shouldn't i ?

you are free to write the next one in the series ..

 

Simple and beautiful... loved the lines

 

why justify something that's right?

So next one should be:
Rest that three line sequence.

 

^^ thanks rikkky

^ so be it

these days are lonely .... so i will write more... literature in shadow days is amusing, alluring !!!

 

This is so beautiful. You convey so much with so little; almost make it look easy.

 

^ its not easyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ... the most difficult times make u say ur heart easily ...cause u just thought soo much to put you point ..i hate it

 

It is beautiful nevertheless.
Sucks that now are difficult times for you but it draws out beautiful literature for sure.