Before you read the stuff i wrote a few things to say NO I AM NOT DEPRESSED NO I DIDNT LOSE ANYTHING NO I AM NOT SUICIDAL LOL I wrote this loooooong back.......on my Blackberry, totally forgot about it and now here it is.... Windows are broken Glass hanging out my flesh Life is scattered Feelings are lonely Moments are darker Darker than the night Bottles are empty Blood out on the floor War is imminent price paid by Innocent lives Happiness is mystery Among Cold blooded animals Are we real Do we live Do we care Do we feel Doesn't matter to me. As long as peace prevails
I somehow felt that the story is about some sort of peacekeeping that is actually using violence ... Perhaps I am wrong ... anyway Poems are not really my forte.
Now whatever little bit i understood after reading earlier I am all the more confused now after reading ur view points...
Wow...nice to see these comments.......however, would like to know what you guys think of the poetry though?