No Name Thought of Yet

Before you read the stuff i wrote a few things to say
NO I AM NOT DEPRESSED
NO I DIDNT LOSE ANYTHING
NO I AM NOT SUICIDAL
LOL

I wrote this loooooong back.......on my Blackberry, totally forgot about it and now here it is....

Windows are broken
Glass hanging out my flesh

Life is scattered
Feelings are lonely

Moments are darker
Darker than the night

Bottles are empty
Blood out on the floor

War is imminent
price paid by
Innocent lives

Happiness is mystery
Among
Cold blooded animals

Are we real
Do we live
Do we care
Do we feel

Doesn't matter to me.
As long as peace prevails

 

you could even catch a bullet from the peace-keeping force

 

What does that mean???

 

I somehow felt that the story is about some sort of peacekeeping that is actually using violence ...
Perhaps I am wrong ... anyway Poems are not really my forte.

 

Even the hero gets a bullet in the chest

 

Now whatever little bit i understood after reading earlier I am all the more confused now after reading ur view points...

 

LOL

Double LOL.

 

Wow...nice to see these comments.......however, would like to know what you guys think of the poetry though?

 

Lines are awesome bro..

 

Thanks a ton bro.....

 

Its written well dude!!!

 

Poetry is good, but what made you think people would ask if you're suicidal?

 

People did ask me after reading another poetry that i had written earlier......in another post.

 

Oh..lol...ohk...