i am just me...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Aug 27, 2010.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i used em' again....short forms.....oops....4give me ...plzzzz


    dey lauf over my so called "innocenc"
    dey say dey r sick ov all my nonsense...
    dey smile over my inquisitiv eyes
    dey pull my cheeks after every word ov mine..
    dey describe me as a child
    dey always feel dat even d wildest ov my anger is just "mild"...
    dey always describe me as cute and kiddish
    i dunno wat to do...i ain't got much ov optns....i just frown with small eyes nd dat too is termed as behaviour dat is childish..!!
    dey say dat dun' understand dat if my behaviour is intentional or is it not
    nd i feel like answerin' dat y r ur eyes not able to c dat if i am angry ...dat anger is "hot"..
    i dun' ever understand dat wat exactly hav i done or i do to recieve d tag of "innocent"...childish" or "sweet"
    i feel as though i am always under scrutiny...b it bout wat i eat...b it dat i hav got white feet..
    i dun' get wats wrong if i am frightened of vitnessin' fyts
    i dun' get wats ryt in callin' quitz afetr bein' wid each other 4 soo many days nd nytes..
    maybe i am dumb...
    bt d way ppl think..it just makes me feel numb..
    i dunno wat it is...actually nw...i say nor do i care
    i dun' care hw well on ur scale do i fare..
    i convince hard myself to believe dat it does not matter
    i say dat dat it doesn't matter if all ov my drmz scatter...
    i swear dat i wud build em' all again
    wid all d sweat...blood nd pain..
    u mite call me nythin'l u want to all i say is dun' doubt my capabilties...
    i dunno wat is it..postiv or negativ...it shud not hinder wid my ablity...
    if u think dat i am innocent...or nythin' else..all i want to say is...i am just me...
    nd i always will b me... :)
     
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    nice and simple ..
    but its a pain to read it coz of the extensive use of short forms..
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ..............
     
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Right, straight from the heart. Shows your emotions pretty well. But, dunno, failed to charm. And, short forms did'nt bother 'cause they were quite easy to read.
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thnx both ov u... :)

    nd horsemouth...i'd try to rite smthin' b8r next time...thnx .. :)
     
  6. monica_decosta

    monica_decosta Active Member

    k... s this ws ur first !!
     
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

  8. mygittu

    mygittu Member

    i like this one...good writing bro
     
  9. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i
    a m
    a
    g i r l . . .

    and thank you
     
  10. Vader

    Vader New Member

    . . . . . .
     
  11. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Just for the Lulz :RollLol:
     
  12. mygittu

    mygittu Member

    oh m sorry :) anyways nice post......really like it...keep it up....keep posting more...
     
  13. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    yes.......................
     
  14. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    ha

    ha

    ha >_<
     

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