maybe the world's walking too fast.. or maybe i am walking too slow maybe i am just juggling my present and past or maybe i am just feeling a lil' low.. maybe i am just left behind.. or maybe i want it to be so maybe i am out of my mind or maybe i am jus a lil low.. maybe no one cares any more maybe they're jus following the flow maybe the whole world's a whore or maybe i am jus feeling low.. maybe i jus want to run far away or maybe im confused..i dun know maybe i am waiting for rainy days or maybe i am jus low..
Simply Aweeee-some !! left behind ...no one cares ... run away ... may be im just lil low ... wow (so damm true when one take a dip ) very neatly expressed ...if i would have written it i would have added a couple of more deeper thoughts... ur attempt was really a truthful one !!
thanks a lot umm .. i too could have added more..but then i think poetry shall not be an exaggeration..maybe...i dunno..
maybe it ain't the worldly strife and maybe it's neither you maybe it's just the normal pace of life maybe there's no reason to feel blue... maybe you don't have to catch up with the rest maybe monotonousity was never your virtue maybe insanity always brought out the best maybe there's no reason to feel blue... maybe caring will make you weak maybe that's the reason you're not in the queue maybe you just need to retain your mystique maybe there's no reason to feel blue... maybe you just need to standstill maybe you should just enjoy your brew maybe you perfectly fits the bill maybe there's no reason to feel blue...
very well wriitten rikky ... its like a new perspective the brighter side ... i never knew u are soo good with words keep posting
Yup when you are child. Yes. Because you are under influence of "adults". And even if you are not, you are "forced" to "fall in line" with their views. But if you are an adult, and living this way, only you stand to be blamed.
there..you proved my point.. i said..some point or the other..i never mentioned childhood or adulthood or whatever..
Hmmm, yes, but referring to your post about "everyone does at some point of the other" - surely childhood was not in your mind. Otherwise you would've pointed that out. In fact, I had to help your argument by mentioning about the childhood!
I trying to sail YOUR boat, so that it can put up some fight ! : Although, I haven't really derailed the thread - forum nazis may want me to quit ... or post about the poem lyrics and measures and rhythm and emotions. (Though I am sure I did comment about the "emotion" part)
you cannot sail MY boat..!! >_< its mine..and how could you possibly know what was i thinking at that time ? you are no mind reader..