here is the link for mp3 file. electrons - ReverbNation this is the music for the poem by nandy0894 here is the link of that post. https://indianguitartabs.com/f24/laut-aaunga-52250.html only some of the lyrics has been changed(sorry nandy need to go with the music here are the lyrics : kahin kisi badal pe .. likha ik sapna... khawabon ki duniya .. main hai koi apna laut krr mein aunga haan zaroorr.. poochunga tujhse..kya tha kasoor.. sooni sookhi raaho mein main khali khali baato mein main baarisho k paani mein main baharo k rango mein main kapdo ki silvato mein.. karvato ki aahto mein main band se kivado mein main khuli khuli aankho mein main bheegi bheegi palko mein main akele se sapno mein main fir bhi na maanega tu to .. chupke se aaunga tujhko chhoo jaunga maathe ko sehlakr pyar se sulakr mein kho jaunga.. mein fir laut aunga..
you have a really nice voice..and nah..i dun mind your changing the lyrics.. somehow i felt that the strumming does not gel that well with the singing..what say?
humm dat is..the problem.. rite. I must record it with proper rhythm. and any other change with different part of the song. ( i think this raw needs many changes.) how was the starting i was little confused with intro part of the song. and ending.. p.s. i m worst at singing.. well thanks..