Fallin in Love with an angel...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rickkkyrich, Apr 7, 2010.

  1. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Hi guys.. this is an old composition of mine..thought of sharing it with you all...

    Fallin in Love with an angel...

    I used to be an ordinary guy
    I was living like a system on standby
    then i came across you angel
    you're the one for me who made things right


    Nights seems so long, The days were endless
    life without you was in vain and aimless
    You empowered me my angel
    you're the one who led me to light


    Living without you is more than a sin
    life's useless like a fish without a fin
    I can't live without you angel
    you're the one who makes me feel alive


    Your soft sentimental silky voice
    is precious as its symphony of my life
    I'm so in love with you my angel
    you're so lovey dovey my snow-white !!!
     
  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    its a cute poem, how old were wen you wrote it?
     
  3. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    well old in the sense .. i wrote it around 6 months back.. thats it.. :)
     
  4. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    heya its a really cute poem.......angelic
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    seemed*
    nice poem.. cute.. :)
     
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Awwwww... Cutie cutie... :D
     
  7. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Thanks for the correction... I am poor with English ... :]
     
  8. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Lol... Yup...
     
  9. mermaid

    mermaid New Member

    cute one !!
     
  10. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    so is she.. :]
     
  11. mermaid

    mermaid New Member

    yeah nandy wud be cute no doubt :) ricky
     
  12. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    If you wanna hit on nandy you can directly do that :p:
     
  13. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member


    haha.. l o l ???
     
  14. mermaid

    mermaid New Member

    thnks for the hint rickky hahah :)
     

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