i feel so tired, bored and irritated clutching to my head so tight..aaargh i am so frustrated trying to write something just to vent my anger .. but after the frenzy's over i realize that oops i just tore that paper.. and then i pick up my tennis racket hit the ball so hard..that i need detectives to track it .. jumping around..i reach the kitchen just to have some water or a bite and i gulp down the whole bottle of water but still don't feel alright go out to have some fresh air and i end up chiding life for being unfair sitting down at the railing i see kids screaming loud..ah they are just playing the birds are chirping but i feel they are howling every sound in the universe seems to be growing ( on me ) then i decide to leave all the rest go back home..in my bed..my tranquil nest hug one ****ow tight and tuck the other under my head finally i feel relaxed..out of my misery and confusion ..in my bed .. please..do not comment.. " outburst of emotions" i know it is.. but..aah...whatever!
Its illegal to even mention the word. The gods don't want it to happen. Oh, as you said, no comments about the poem, though it seems you have still tried to rhyme more..
the same that's wrong with the censorship in 'tujhme rab ***hta hai', 'i love tomato ****ney', and so on... Naah, i mean you force-rhymed again...anyway, its your poetry, you style... BTW I did something: Here's your list of recent poems (2011-12): irritation. whatever i do is never going to be enough for you i did not surrender ,, i resigned i remember .. ... hard as a stone growing up ..really? smitten .. if i..would you? why..!! little girl.. following my dreams watch out. lil girl whatever i do ..is never going to be enough for you mirror the rat race staying me incoherent the mad crowd in my dreams turning prodigal.. There were more before that, but didn't mention. Catch my drift? Dont say thanks
Lol...that's not what I meant..It was to say how much negative you've become..Some of them were good, poetic. Maybe time to rethink your priorities??
oops some of them are not too negative..you know umm.. smitten if i..would you following my dreams in my dreams umm..okay the ratio matterz.. yes maybe..high time t think ...nyways...thank you
the problem is with P I L L **** Looks like we don't want to show that we use such a word ... *I Wonder who comes up with this list of censored words*
