ye kis ki parchaayi hai kise dhoondh rahi hai aanath hai shayad ya raasta bhool gayi hai ya phir faink gaya hoga koi raat ke andhere main naarangi sooraj aur kaali sadkoon ke beech.. dari huee hai ye gali badi sunsaan hai na sab soo jate hain iss waqt tak rang, umar, kad khaathi batana mushkil hai javaan ladki lagti hai jab lamp post ke paas jati hai aur choti bacchi jab mere pass rehti hai ladki hai ye sach hai abhi jab kuch kuute lad rahe the udhar koode ke dheer ke pass tab aayi ...mere pass hum ne khel khela ek dusare ko choone ka paas aane ka duur jane ka lukka chhuppi bhi.. Sun parchaayi darr mujhe bhi lagta hai andhere ka nahi, kutton ka nahi na insaanoon ka na bhagvaan ka sooraj ka.. subhe ka.. sab jaan jayenge hum bhi jaan jayenge tu kaun hai... main kaun hunn tera naam mera dharm kush dukhi gori kaali rishte, responsiblity, kaam life..!!
subhaaan alllaahh!! amazing lines and yes i agree with rickkky ..do not add english words to it..it seems to over shadow the fear and the emotion.. and the title..umm my suggestion .. tanha parchhai or maybe khoi parchhai ??
Really good lines...Well arranged thoughts.. hey nandy u mean "Bhatakti aatma"...naa must be sumthing else ?